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Trililingualism in Kazakhstan

The research topic on the impact of trilingual education system is chosen because as a student of NIS schools I study in three languages. I have been learning some subjects in Russian since 7th grade, and I have noticed changes in the level of proficiency in three languages. Undoubtedly, my level of English has improved thanks to the three-language unity project. Therefore, I decided to research its influence on different aspects of life and the quality of education. The trilingual education system includes the study of three or more languages in order to increase the competitiveness of the state and improve the quality of education. Kazakhstan has introduced trilingualism to actively participate in world’s growth process. The main purpose of the research is to determine impacts of trilingual policy on the level of language proficiency of the population and identify problems caused by implementation of the new education reform. The study will consider the following three main objectives:  reasons for the adoption of trilingualism in Kazakhstan;  difficulties and opportunities provided by a multilingual system;  influence of the new learning system on quality of education. The problem is relevant among students; I have witnessed a situation where students spent more time learning foreign languages than Kazakh. There was a case that occurred with my friend when she entered NIS. From an early age she studied in the Kazakh language and mastered it at the highest level, but she had problems with Russian and English. Therefore, she began to diligently study these languages and use them in everyday life to communicate with friends. As a result, her knowledge of a foreign language has improved, but now it is difficult for her to express herself in her native language. It is a common situation for most students because the trilingual system requires students to be fluent in three languages. I want to investigate the other implications of a program called the unity of three languages to see if this was a good or bad decision. The question is very important to be researched, since the transition to a multilingual society is one of the goals of the Kazakhstani government. The research results can be useful to various educational institutions and people interested in studying the trilingual education system.
The
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topic on the impact of trilingual
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is chosen
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as a
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NIS
schools I
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in three
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languages
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some
subjects in Russian since 7th grade, and I have noticed
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changes
in the
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level
of proficiency in three
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languages
.
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, my
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level
of English has
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improved
thanks to the three-language unity project.
Therefore
, I decided to
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its influence on
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different
aspects of life and the quality of education.

The trilingual
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education
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system
includes the
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study
of three or more
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languages
in order to increase the competitiveness of the state and
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improve
the quality of
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education
. Kazakhstan has introduced
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trilingualism
to
actively
participate in world’s growth process.

The main purpose of the
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research
is to determine impacts of trilingual policy on the
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level
of
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language
proficiency of the population and identify problems caused by implementation of the new
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education
reform.

The
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study
will consider the following three main objectives:

 reasons for the adoption of
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trilingualism
in Kazakhstan;

 difficulties and opportunities provided by a multilingual system;

 influence of the new learning
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system
on quality of education.

The problem is relevant among
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students
; I have witnessed a situation where
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students
spent more time learning foreign
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languages
than Kazakh. There was a case that occurred with my friend when she entered
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NIS
. From an early age she studied in the Kazakh
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language
and mastered it at the highest
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level
,
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but
she had problems with Russian and English.
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, she began to
diligently
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study
these
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languages
and
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use
them in everyday life to communicate with friends.
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, her knowledge of a foreign
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language
has
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improved
,
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but
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now
it is difficult for her to express herself in her native
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language
. It is a common situation for most
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students
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because
the trilingual
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system
requires
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students
to be fluent in three languages.

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languages
to
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see
if this was a
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good
or
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decision. The question is
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very
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to
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Kazakhstani
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government
. The
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results can be useful to various educational institutions and
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people
interested in studying the trilingual
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education
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system
.
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IELTS essay Trililingualism in Kazakhstan

Essay
  American English
9 paragraphs
375 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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