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travelling is that so important in our life

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Living or visiting foreign country is an unforgettable experience. There are a lot of new opportunities and knowledge that foreign countries can give. Especially some exotic and isolated countries. These countries have their own mode of live which differentiate from others. Many people travel to these countries to meet new culture and get acquainted with local traditions. However, certain countries have restrictions and obligations that visiting people must follow. Thus, in terms of social perspective it essential for foreigner to respect and understand another country’s local custom and traditions. It must be said that people should change their behavior act politely in order to show respect to the countries’ custom they are living or visiting.
Living or visiting foreign
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is an unforgettable experience. There are
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a lot of
new opportunities and knowledge that foreign
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countries
can give.
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exotic and isolated
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countries
. These
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countries
have their
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mode of
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live
which differentiate from others.
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travel to these
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countries
to
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meet
new culture and
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get
acquainted with local traditions.
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, certain
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countries
have restrictions and obligations that visiting
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people
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must
follow.
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, in terms of social perspective
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essential for foreigner to respect and understand another
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country’s
local custom and traditions. It
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be said
that
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should
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change
their behavior act
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show
respect to the
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custom they are living or visiting.

IELTS essay travelling is that so important in our life

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
115 words
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4.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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