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travelling is that so important in our life

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Living or visiting foreign country is an unforgettable experience. There are a lot of new opportunities and knowledge that foreign countries can give. Especially some exotic and isolated countries. These countries have their own mode of live which differentiate from others. Many people travel to these countries to meet new culture and get acquainted with local traditions. However, certain countries have restrictions and obligations that visiting people must follow. Thus, in terms of social perspective it essential for foreigner to respect and understand another country’s local custom and traditions. It must be said that people should change their behavior act politely in order to show respect to the countries’ custom they are living or visiting.
Living or visiting foreign
country
is an unforgettable experience. There are
a lot of
new opportunities and knowledge that foreign
countries
can give.
Especially
some
exotic and isolated
countries
. These
countries
have their
own
mode of
live
which differentiate from others.
Many
people
travel to these
countries
to
meet
new culture and
get
acquainted with local traditions.
However
, certain
countries
have restrictions and obligations that visiting
people
must
follow.
Thus
, in terms of social perspective
it
essential for foreigner to respect and understand another
country’s
local custom and traditions. It
must
be said
that
people
should
change
their behavior act
politely
in order to
show
respect to the
countries’
custom they are living or visiting.
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IELTS essay travelling is that so important in our life

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
115 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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