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Traffic congestion seems to be increasing. What causes do you think are the causes of it. What solution are come forth to curb it down. v.2

Traffic congestion seems to be increasing. What causes do you think are the causes of it. What solution are come forth to curb it down. v. 2
Over population is the first reason for traffic congestion. It has been seen from past few decades that traffic decades that rise in human as well as development of infrastructures increased the population. As the population is more, need for transportation' s increased. People as well as goods are required to be carried from one place to another. Traffic has been major setback for usual delay caused in ones life. As due to congestion of roads, lack of proper planning and scope of infrastructure causes this issue. Traffic congestion is increasing as lack of proper infrastructure, proper roads, inadequate traffic rules and unnecessary use of vehicles. As we know that for e. g. if a two members in a family use two different cars than surely traffic will increase as if every family uses one car according to the members instead they can us public transport or same vehicle can drop family members. Also, the traffic rules should be more strict so that citizens would follow them. Fines and punishment should be given for those who not abiding the rules. City infrastructure should be developed. Town planning should be made carefully by governing authorities. More bridges should be built so that pedestrians can walk from fly over while vehicles on road. Also, regular check up of vehicles should be made mandatory due to which sudden break down and accidents can be avoided. Also, vehicle insurance, repair, oil usage must be tracked. Encroachment of hawkers should be stopped so that road will not be crowded. Instead hawkers zone can be built. Traffic signals should have well maintenance. Also, regular staff on the high ways should be appointed. Heavy vehicles like trucks, tempo’s should have a different road, so that crowd in daily road will decrease. Also, people should try to use public transport, trains and monorails should be used for this purpose. New software must be used for automation of traffic system in a state as implemented in London. Also, bicycles can be used for small distance and separate track can be made for it. Getting a solution for traffic congestion can be obtained by combine efforts of government as well a people.
Over population is the
first
reason for
traffic
congestion
. It has been
seen
from past few decades that
traffic
decades that rise in human as
well
as development of
infrastructures
increased the population. As the population is more, need for
transportation&
#039; s increased.
People
as
well
as
goods
are required
to
be carried
from one place to another.
Traffic
has been major setback for usual delay caused in
ones
life. As due to
congestion
of
roads
, lack of proper planning and scope of
infrastructure
causes this issue.

Traffic
congestion
is increasing as lack of proper
infrastructure
, proper
roads
, inadequate
traffic
rules
and unnecessary
use
of
vehicles
. As we know that for
e. g.
if a two members in a family
use
two
different
cars than
surely
traffic
will increase as if every family
uses
one car according to the members
instead
they can us public transport or same
vehicle
can drop family members.
Also
, the
traffic
rules
should be more strict
so
that citizens would follow them. Fines and punishment should be
given
for those who not abiding the
rules
.

City
infrastructure
should
be developed
. Town planning should
be made
carefully
by governing authorities. More bridges should
be built
so
that pedestrians can walk from
fly
over while
vehicles
on
road
.
Also
, regular
check
up of
vehicles
should
be made
mandatory due to which sudden break down and accidents can
be avoided
.
Also
,
vehicle
insurance, repair, oil usage
must
be
tracked
. Encroachment of hawkers should be
stopped
so
that
road
will not
be crowded
.
Instead
hawkers zone can
be built
.
Traffic
signals should have
well
maintenance.
Also
, regular staff on the high ways should
be appointed
. Heavy
vehicles
like trucks, tempo’s should have a
different
road
,
so
that crowd in daily
road
will decrease.

Also
,
people
should try to
use
public transport, trains and monorails should be
used
for this purpose. New software
must
be
used
for automation of
traffic
system in a state as implemented in London.
Also
, bicycles can be
used
for
small
distance and separate
track
can
be made
for it. Getting a solution for
traffic
congestion
can
be obtained
by combine efforts of
government
as
well
a
people
.
13Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
33Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
4Mistakes

IELTS essay Traffic congestion seems to be increasing. What causes do you think are the causes of it. What solution are come forth to curb it down. v. 2

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
362 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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