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Computer are an essential feature of modern education. Some people believe that certain subjects, such as mathematics, are better taught using computers. Other, however, think that there are aspects of education in which computer use is inadequate. v.2

Computer are an essential feature of modern education. Some people believe that certain subjects, such as mathematics, are better taught using computers. Other, however, think that there are aspects of education in which computer use is inadequate. v. 2
Innovation is good for better life, nowadays, many area affected by computer uses. Some crowd believe the computer training are necessary to modern world. While, another group layman belief chocks and blackboard theory are much influence than computers education. Discuss both the view and given my opinion in coming paragraph. At present day, computers teaching techniques are normal in education. In this techniques there are different types of video, puzzle and movies are used. Because of that kids are admired to good study. For instance the scientific research prove that people are memories and remember easily data if they watching videos and movies compare to blackboard studies. In addition, presently, in all industries automation are used for production and it is operated by computers, due to this computer training are must be need in modern life. However, In blackboard system human being are tech all subject it is good for kids and they better understand to student compare to machine. for example pupils have some idea or confusion about topic they asked they mentor in computers education it is not possible. Furthermore, computers are reflected uv rays, this rays are harmful for human eyes and sometime because of uv rays teenagers are losing their vision. Moreover, under graduation loss they physical attachment with another people and lack of physical activity due to modern computers education. In a nutshell, I am partially agree with both opinion they are equally advantages and drawbacks of use of computers education systems.
Innovation is
good
for better life, nowadays,
many
area
affected
by computer
uses
.
Some
crowd
believe
the computer training are necessary to modern world. While, another group layman belief chocks and blackboard theory are much influence than computers
education
. Discuss both the view and
given
my opinion in coming paragraph.

At present day, computers teaching techniques are normal in
education
. In
this
techniques there are
different
types of video, puzzle and movies are
used
.
Because
of that kids
are admired
to
good
study.
For instance
the scientific research prove that
people
are memories and remember
easily
data if
they watching
videos and movies compare to blackboard studies.
In addition
,
presently
, in all
industries
automation are
used
for production and it
is operated
by computers, due to this computer training are
must
be need
in modern life.

However
, In blackboard system human being are tech all subject it is
good
for
kids and
they better understand to student compare to machine.
for
example pupils have
some
idea
or confusion about topic they asked they mentor in computers
education
it is not possible.
Furthermore
, computers
are reflected
uv
rays,
this
rays are harmful for human eyes and sometime
because
of
uv
rays
teenagers
are losing their vision.
Moreover
, under graduation loss they physical attachment with another
people
and lack of physical activity due to modern
computers
education.

In a nutshell, I am
partially
agree
with both opinion they are
equally
advantages and drawbacks of
use
of computers
education
systems.
7Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
4Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
13Mistakes

IELTS essay Computer are an essential feature of modern education. Some people believe that certain subjects, such as mathematics, are better taught using computers. Other, however, think that there are aspects of education in which computer use is inadequate. v. 2

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