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Traffic congestion and air pollution are becoming problematic in most cities around the world. People must be encouraged to use their cars less and public transport more. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Traffic congestion and air pollution are becoming problematic in most cities around the world. People must be encouraged to use their cars less and public transport more. ljqPQ
Problems such as traffic jam and air pollution are common in major cities around the world. People are now advised to cut down on the usage of cars and to utilise more of the public means of transport. In my opinion, this can lead to a healthier environment. I strongly agree that public transport is the best modes of transportation in today era
Problems such as traffic jam and air pollution are common in major cities around the world.
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IELTS essay Traffic congestion and air pollution are becoming problematic in most cities around the world. People must be encouraged to use their cars less and public transport more.

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62 words
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