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tpo 5 the Chaco great houses

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The material discusses the usage of the Chaco great building. While the reading suggests three theories that could determine the building usage, the listening challenges all these suggestions and says that none of them is convincing First, the author mentions that Chaco structures could be used for residential. on the other hand, the professor opposes this and states that this building looks like native Americans' apartments just from outside. The lecture adds that there is a doubt that this building was used for residential when they look at the building from inside. the speaker explains that if people habitat these buildings, they supposed to have many fireplaces for daily cooking. However, the listening claims that in the largest Chaco building, there are just ten fireplaces, while the rooms of the house are very big that could fit a hundred families. Consequently, these buildings could not be used for residential. Second, the writer states that these buildings could be storage. On the contrary, the lecturer refutes this and points out that the large empty rooms in the building could be a storage, but they do not contain maize containers. The professor adds that if these buildings were storage, it is supposed to have maize on the ground or maize remaining containers. Third, the author posits that the Chaco building could be used to celebrate ceremonies. Conversely, the speaker contradicts this and contends that besides the broken pots, there are building material and construction tools. The professor explains that all of this stuff might be trash when the Chaco structures were built. In addition to that, the lecturer states that pots might be from the meals of the construction workers. The speaker concludes that finding these pots is not good evidence that these buildings were used for special ceremonies.
The material discusses the usage of the
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Chaco
great
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building
. While the reading suggests three theories that could determine the
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building
usage, the listening challenges all these suggestions and says that none of them is
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convincing


First
, the author mentions that
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Chaco
structures could be
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used
for residential.
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on
the other hand, the professor opposes this and states that this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
building
looks like native Americans' apartments
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
just
from outside. The lecture
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
adds
that there is a doubt that this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
building
was
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
used
for residential when they look at the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
building
from inside.
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the
speaker
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explains
that if
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people
habitat these
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buildings
, they supposed to have
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many
fireplaces for daily cooking.
However
, the listening claims that in the largest
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Chaco
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
building
, there are
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
just
ten fireplaces, while the rooms of the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
house
are
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very
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big
that could fit a hundred families.
Consequently
, these
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buildings
could not be
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
used
for residential.

Second, the writer states that these
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
buildings
could be storage.
On the contrary
, the lecturer refutes this and points out that the large empty rooms in the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
building
could be a storage,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
they do not contain maize containers. The professor
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
adds
that if these
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
buildings
were storage, it
is supposed
to have maize on the ground or maize remaining containers.

Third, the author posits that the
Possible spelling mistake found.
Chaco
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
building
could be
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
used
to celebrate ceremonies.
Conversely
, the speaker contradicts this and contends that
besides
the broken pots, there are
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
building
material and construction tools. The professor
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
explains
that all of this stuff might be trash when the
Possible spelling mistake found.
Chaco
structures
were built
.
In addition
to that, the lecturer states that pots might be from the meals of the construction workers. The speaker concludes that finding these pots is not
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
evidence that these
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
buildings
were
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
used
for special ceremonies.
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IELTS essay tpo 5 the Chaco great houses

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
297 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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