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tpo 34 Integrated task

tpo 34 Integrated task Lr3X8
The reading asserts three theories, which explains the cause of extinction of Steller’s sea cow, who lived in the water around Bering Island. However, the professor refutes the reading by saying that no one is aware of the main cause of the extinction and there are problems with the each theory, which is mentioned in the passage. First, the article claims that, groups of native Siberian people may have over hunted the sea cows and the cow became extinct. In contrast, the lecture states that the sea cow was a massive creature, which was 9 meters long and weighted ten tons. The Siberian po. . .
The reading asserts three theories, which
explains
the cause of extinction of
Steller
’s sea
cow
, who
lived
in the water around Bering Island.
However
, the professor refutes the reading by saying that no one is aware of the main cause of the extinction and there are problems with
the each
theory, which
is mentioned
in the passage.

First
, the article claims that, groups of native Siberian
people
may have over hunted the sea
cows
and the
cow
became extinct.
In contrast
, the lecture states that the sea
cow
was a massive creature, which was 9 meters long and weighted ten tons. The Siberian
po
.
.
.
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IELTS essay tpo 34 Integrated task

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
106 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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