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tpo 32sounds "quackers" (from the Russian word for frog sounds). The sources of the sound seemed to be moving with great speed and agility;however, the submarines' sonar (a method of detecting objects underwater) was unable to detect any so

tpo 32sounds " quackers" (from the Russian word for frog sounds). The sources of the sound seemed to be moving with great speed and agility; however, the submarines' sonar (a method of detecting objects underwater) was unable to detect any so QLKp9
The reading and lecture are both about quackers which is a sound produce under the water. The author of the reading feels that this odd sound is unable to detect and it moves at a great speed and presents several reasons for this casue. The lecturer challenged the claim made by the author. He is on the opinion that quackers are the mysterious phenomenon and on one actually find the solution to this specific problem. To begin with, the author argues that a kind of sound is made by the orca whales to attract the other orca whales during the mating period. He also mentions that this similar sound is detected by the submarines. The specific argument is challenged by the lecturer. He claims that it is plausible but unlikely not a good idea. He also states that orca whales live near the surface of the ocean whereas submarine locates underground then how sonar can detect the sound. Second, the author suggests that the sound may make by the Giant squid who are very intelligent and they live in the deep ocean. He also adds that they have a soft body without a skeleton and that's why sonar can not detect them. The lecturer rebuts this by mentioning that Russian submarines detected the sound 1960 and reported it 1980 decade. He also elaborates this by mentioning that Giant squid still then produce this odd sound and it is not possible that they suddenly disappear in 1980. Third, the author posits that may be military technology of the of another country secretly tracking the submarine. He also states that this foreign submarine creates the sound and they have a kind of technology which is not recognized by the sonar. In contrast, the lecturer position is that when the foreign submarine moved it must create a sound from the engine. He also additionally says technology was not so advance that they manufactured the silent engine.
The reading and lecture are both about
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quackers
which is a
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sound
produce under the water. The
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author
of the reading feels that this odd
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sound
is unable to detect and it
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moves
at a great speed and presents several reasons for this
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casue
.
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The
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lecturer
challenged the claim made by the
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author
. He is on the opinion that
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quackers
are the mysterious phenomenon and on one actually find the solution to this specific problem.

To
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begin
with, the
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author
argues that a kind of
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sound
is made
by the orca whales to attract the other orca whales during the mating period. He
also
mentions that this similar
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sound
is detected
by the
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submarines
. The specific argument
is challenged
by the
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lecturer
. He claims that it is plausible
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but
unlikely not a
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good
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idea
. He
also
states that orca whales
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live
near the surface of the ocean whereas
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submarine
locates underground then how sonar can detect the sound.

Second, the
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author
suggests that the
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sound
may
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make
by the Giant squid who are
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very
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intelligent and
they
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live
in the deep ocean. He
also
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adds
that they have a soft body without a skeleton and that's why sonar can not detect them. The
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lecturer
rebuts this by mentioning that Russian
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submarines
detected the
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sound
1960 and reported it 1980 decade. He
also
elaborates this by mentioning that Giant squid
still
then produce this odd
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sound
and it is not possible that they
suddenly
disappear in 1980.

Third, the
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author
posits that may be military technology of the of another country
secretly
tracking the
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submarine
. He
also
states that this foreign
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submarine
creates the
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sound and
they have a kind of technology which is not recognized by the sonar.
In contrast
, the
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lecturer
position is that when the foreign
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submarine
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moved
it
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must
create a
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sound
from the engine. He
also
additionally
says technology was not
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so
advance that they manufactured the silent engine.
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IELTS essay tpo 32sounds " quackers" (from the Russian word for frog sounds). The sources of the sound seemed to be moving with great speed and agility; however, the submarines' sonar (a method of detecting objects underwater) was unable to detect any so

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4 paragraphs
323 words
5.5
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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