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TPO 31

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A fossil skeleton of a dinosaur called sinosauropteryx, preserved in volcanic ash, was discovered in liaoning, china. there is very strong evidence that sinosauropteryx had feathers and the opposite idea is not true. the first reason, there is a great protein that shows the sinosauropteryx had the feathers so after the animal died and was buried in volcanic ash, its skin may not have decomposed into fibres. the second reason, according to some evidence, some of the critics argue that the lines surronding the skeleton are much more likely to be fossilized remains of feathers than remains of frills. the third reason, there is some color like orange that shows there was feathers that they used.
A fossil skeleton of a dinosaur called
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sinosauropteryx
, preserved in volcanic ash,
was discovered
in
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liaoning
, china.
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there
is
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very
strong evidence that
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sinosauropteryx
had
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feathers
and the opposite
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idea
is not true.
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the
first
reason, there is a great protein
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that


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shows


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the
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sinosauropteryx
had the
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feathers
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so
after the animal
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died
and
was buried
in volcanic ash, its skin may not have decomposed into
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fibres
.
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the
second reason, according to
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some
evidence,
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some of the
critics argue that the lines
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surronding
the skeleton are much more likely to
be fossilized
remains of
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feathers
than remains of frills.
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the
third reason, there is
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some
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color
like orange
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that


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shows


there was
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feathers
that they
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used
.

IELTS essay TPO 31

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
116 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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