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TPO 30. THE BURNING MIRROR

TPO 30. THE BURNING MIRROR oR15V

The reading passage describes three reasons against the use of burning mirror by Greeks of Syracuse as a weapon to defend themselves when the Roman navy attacked this port city 2200 years ago. And the lecturer rejects them as unconvincing. The first reason in the reading states that the ancient Greeks lacked the technology for producing the burning mirror, thus they could not have developed such an advanced device which should have been relatively wide with a precise parabolic curvature. However, the professor clarifies that the mirror did not have to be made by a single large sheet of copper, the Greeks actually combined dozens of small mirrors for the purpose and Greek mathematicians already possessed the knowledge about the parabolic curvature at that time. Therefore, they could have invented the burning mirror. Against the second reason described by the passage which suggests that the mirror was impractical because it took a long time to burn the boats, the lecturer points out that the experiment supporting that reason was based on the assumption that the ancient Greeks concentrated the sunlight on the wooden part of the boats in order to catch fire, but there was another material on them that is extremely inflammable even if the ship is moving. Hence, the mirror did not take more than few seconds to set the ships on fire. Finally, in regard to the third reason presented by the reading which claims that flaming arrows were already used for the same goal and as effective, so there was no reason for building the mirror, the professor explains that the Roman soldiers were familiar to these arrows and the mirror was more effective since it was a surprising attack to them.

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use
 of burning mirror by Greeks of Syracuse as a weapon to defend themselves when the Roman navy attacked this port city 2200 years ago. And the lecturer rejects them as unconvincing.

The first
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reason
 in the reading states that the ancient Greeks lacked the technology for producing the burning mirror, thus
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 wide with a precise parabolic curvature. However
, the professor clarifies that the mirror did not This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
be made
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small
 mirrors for the purpose and You use this word too often, consider replacing it withunimaginableunintelligiblepuzzlingimpenetrableopaqueunfathomable
Greek
 mathematicians already possessed the knowledge about the parabolic curvature at that time. Therefore
, they could have invented the burning mirror.

Against the second You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlogicreasoningsense
reason
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described
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because
 it took a long time to burn the boats, the lecturer points out that the experiment supporting that You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlogicreasoningsense
reason
was based
 on the assumption that the ancient Greeks concentrated the sunlight on the wooden part of the boats in order to catch fire, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 there was another material on them that is
extremely
 inflammable even if the ship is moving. Hence
, the mirror did not take more than few seconds to set the ships on fire.

Finally
, in regard to the third You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlogicreasoningsense
reason
 presented by the reading which claims that flaming arrows were already This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 for the same goal and as effective, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 there was no You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlogicreasoningsense
reason
 for building the mirror, the professor This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :interprets
explains
 that the Roman soldiers were familiar to these arrows and the mirror was more effective since it was a surprising attack to them. 