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Do you agree or disagree with the statement: Being creative, rather than planning carefully more often results in the best solution of a problem.

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If I were asked which weapon I prefer to use to win a battle—shield or spear, I think I would lose using any weapon alone. It can be vividly compared to this topic. When finding solutions to a problem, a careful plan is like a strong shield protecting us from going into chaos, while creativity is like a sharp spear helping us solve problems efficiently. We need both of them. To begin with, let’s look at the importance of being creative. On the one hand, being creative can help people think out of the box and find effective solutions. On the other hand, without ideas coming from creative. . .
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I would lose using any weapon alone. It can be
vividly
compared to this topic. When finding solutions to a problem, a careful plan is like a strong shield protecting us from going into chaos, while creativity is like a sharp spear helping us solve problems
efficiently
. We need both of them.

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help
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ideas
coming from creative.
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IELTS essay : Being creative, rather than planning carefully more often results in the best solution of a problem.

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
110 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.5
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