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tpo 29 question 1 integrated task writing section

tpo 29 question 1 integrated task writing section 85JAr
The reading and the lecture give information about Edmontosaurus. While the reading supports the migration hypotheses, the lecture refutes all the hypotheses mention in the reading material and provides three reasons to illustrates why those hypothesis are not convincing. First, the professor mentions that there is no reason for the edmontosaurus to imigrate south to a warmer ares. He explain thatthe North Slop was warmer in the past. With a plantafull of sun and warmer tempreture, edmontosaurus could servive and feed on aboundant vegetations. Even though the plants die during the winter time, edmontosaurus could feed and servive on dead plant. That disagree with the reading indicated that the edmontosaurus have to immigrate to dearch for food. Second, contrary to the believe in the reading passage that living in herds is another support to the immigration hypotheses, the lecture explains that living in herds does not particularly support the migration hypothesis. The professor explains that seeking protection from predators is another reasnable reason why animals live in herds. He also give an example of Elks to better illustrate his point. He mentions that Elks live in herds in the same place without migrations. Thus, this disagrees with the migration hypothesis suggested in the reading. Finally, the authour mentions that edmontosaurus have the the power and speed required to travel for a long distance and another evidence to support the imgration hypotheses. In contrast, the speaker refutes that all the edmontasourus have the same skills. In other word, jouvenile edmontasourus are not yet capable to imgrate and travel for a vast distance. As result, the whole herds can not leave the jouvenile edmontosaurus behind and they have to stay and servive the north slope weather. That was another point where the lecture disagrees with the point mentions in the reading passage. Overall, it seems that the lecture showed that there are some discrepancies in the points illustrated in the reading passage.
The
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reading
and the
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lecture
give information about
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Edmontosaurus
. While the
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reading
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supports
the
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migration
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hypotheses
, the
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lecture
refutes all the
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hypotheses
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mention
in the
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reading
material and provides three reasons to
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illustrates
why
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those hypothesis
are not convincing.

First
, the professor
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mentions
that there is no reason for the
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edmontosaurus
to
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imigrate
south to a warmer ares. He
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explain
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thatthe
North Slop was warmer in the past. With a
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plantafull
of sun and warmer
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tempreture
,
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edmontosaurus
could
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servive
and feed on
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aboundant
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vegetations
.
Even though
the plants
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die
during the winter time,
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edmontosaurus
could feed and
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servive
on dead plant. That disagree with the
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reading
indicated that the
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edmontosaurus
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have to
immigrate to
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dearch
for food.

Second, contrary to the
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believe
in the
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reading
passage that living in
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herds
is another
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support
to the immigration
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hypotheses
, the
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lecture
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explains
that living in
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herds
does not
particularly
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support
the
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migration
hypothesis. The professor
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explains
that seeking protection from predators is another
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reasnable
reason why animals
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live
in
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herds
. He
also
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give
an example of Elks to better illustrate his
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point
. He
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mentions
that Elks
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live
in
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herds
in the same place without
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migrations
.
Thus
, this disagrees with the
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migration
hypothesis suggested in the reading.

Finally
, the
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authour
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mentions
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that edmontosaurus have
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the the
power and speed required to travel for a long distance and another evidence to
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support
the
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imgration
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hypotheses
.
In contrast
, the speaker refutes that all the
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edmontasourus
have the same
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skills
. In other word,
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jouvenile
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edmontasourus
are not
yet
capable to
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imgrate
and travel for a vast distance. As result, the whole
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herds
can not
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leave
the
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jouvenile
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edmontosaurus
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behind and
they
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have to
stay and
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servive
the north slope weather. That was another
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point
where the
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lecture
disagrees with the
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point
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mentions
in the
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reading
passage.

Overall
, it seems that the
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lecture
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showed
that there are
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some
discrepancies in the
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points
illustrated in the
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reading
passage.
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IELTS essay tpo 29 question 1 integrated task writing section

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
320 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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