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tpo 22 using ethanol as an alternative to gasoline

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The material discusses the concept of using ethanol as an alternative to gasoline. While the reading claims that ethanol fuel is not a good replacement, the listening challenges this and states that ethanol is a good alternative and all the reasons mention in the reading passages are not convincing. First, the author points out that using ethanol fuel has no advantages over gasoline in the term of global warming since ethanol releases carbon dioxide into the atmosphere. On the other hand, the professor opposes this and posits that ethanol will not add to global warming. He states that it is true that ethanol fuel releases carbon dioxide, but ethanol is made from plants. The lecturer explains that growing plants to make ethanol will reduce carbon dioxide in the air. The speaker adds that plants usually absorb carbon dioxide as a nutrient to grow, so carbon dioxide will be removed from the air during this process. Second, the writer cites that producing ethanol will consume plants that should be used to feed farm animals. On the contrary, the professor encounters this and brings up that using ethanol fuel will not reduce the source of food for animals. The lecturer says that ethanol is made from cellulose which is found in the cell wall of the plants, and this part of plants is not eaten by animals. Third, the reading mentions that ethanol does not have the ability to compete with gasoline on price. Conversely, the lecturer contradicts this and points out that ethanol will be able to compete with gasoline in the future. According to the lecture, if more people start to buy ethanol fuel, the production of it will increase and that will lead to drop its price. The professor points out that if the production of ethanol becomes three times more than its production today, the price of ethanol fuel will drop by forty percent.
The material discusses the concept of using
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ethanol
as an alternative to
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gasoline
. While the reading claims that
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ethanol
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fuel
is not a
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good
replacement, the listening challenges this and states that
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ethanol
is a
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good
alternative and all the reasons mention in the reading passages are not convincing.

First
, the author points out that using
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
ethanol
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
fuel
has no advantages over
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
gasoline
in the term of global warming since
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ethanol
releases
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carbon
dioxide into the atmosphere.
On the other hand
, the professor opposes this and posits that
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ethanol
will not
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add
to global warming. He states that it is true that
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
ethanol
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fuel
releases
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carbon
dioxide,
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but
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ethanol
is made
from
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plants
. The lecturer
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explains
that growing
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plants
to
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make
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ethanol
will
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reduce
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carbon
dioxide in the air. The speaker
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adds
that
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plants
usually
absorb
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carbon
dioxide as a nutrient to grow,
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so
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carbon
dioxide will
be removed
from the air during this process.

Second, the writer cites that producing
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ethanol
will consume
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plants
that should be
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used
to feed farm animals.
On the contrary
, the professor encounters this and brings up that using
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
ethanol
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
fuel
will not
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
reduce
the source of food for animals. The lecturer says that
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
ethanol
is made
from cellulose which
is found
in the cell wall of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
plants
, and this part of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
plants
is not eaten by animals.

Third, the reading mentions that
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
ethanol
does not have the ability to compete with
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
gasoline
on price.
Conversely
, the lecturer contradicts this and points out that
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
ethanol
will be able to compete with
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
gasoline
in the future. According to the lecture, if more
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
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start
to
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buy
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
ethanol
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fuel
, the production of it will increase and that will lead to drop its price. The professor points out that if the production of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
ethanol
becomes three times more than its production
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
today
, the price of
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ethanol
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fuel
will drop by forty percent.
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IELTS essay tpo 22 using ethanol as an alternative to gasoline

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
316 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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