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tpo 16 the archaeology field declining in Britain

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The material discusses the science of archaeology in Britain. While the reading claims that this filed faced many problems and limitations, the listening challenges this and points out that in 1990 new rules and guidelines have been issued to change the whole archaeology in Britain and made it better than it was in the past. First, the author states that a lot of new construction in Bristish town uncovered archaeology valuable sites and destroyed them. On the other hand, the professor opposes this and mentions that before any construction work started, the construction site should be examined by professional archaeologists. The lecturer adds that if the site had historical value, archaeologists collaborated with the local government to preserve the site either by building around it or excavating it to discover it before any construction. Second, the writer cites that the British government did not support archaeology science properly. On the contrary, the professor encounters this and posits that paying for archaeology was done by the construction company, not the government. According to the lecture, the construction company should perform the initial examination and all the work after that. The speaker says that the archaeology field is more supported today than it was in the past. Third, the reading brings up that it was very hard for archaeologists to find jobs in Britain, so they ended up to pursue a different career. Conversely, the professor contradicts this and contends that the new rules and guidelines helped to open new job opportunities for archaeologists. The lecture points out that they did much work, such as examining sites, helping to preserve it, doing research, and processing the data. The speaker concludes that increasing jobs in the archaeology field helped to increase the number of professional archaeologists in Britain, their numbers are higher than they had ever been.
The material discusses the science of
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archaeology
in Britain. While the reading claims that this filed faced
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many
problems and limitations, the listening challenges this and points out that in 1990
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new
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rules
and guidelines have
been issued
to
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change
the whole
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archaeology
in Britain and made it better than it was in the past.

First
, the author states that
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a lot of
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new
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construction
in
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Bristish
town uncovered
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archaeology
valuable
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sites
and
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destroyed
them.
On the other hand
, the professor opposes this and mentions that
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before
any
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construction
work
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started
, the
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construction
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site
should
be examined
by professional
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archaeologists
. The lecturer
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adds
that if the
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site
had historical value,
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archaeologists
collaborated with the local
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government
to preserve the
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site
either by building around it or excavating it to discover it
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before
any construction.

Second, the writer cites that the British
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government
did not support
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archaeology
science
properly
.
On the contrary
, the professor encounters this and posits that paying for
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archaeology
was done
by the
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construction
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company
, not the
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government
. According to the lecture, the
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construction
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company
should perform the initial examination and all the work after that. The speaker says that the
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archaeology
field is more supported
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today
than it was in the past.

Third, the reading brings up that it was
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very
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hard
for
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archaeologists
to find jobs in Britain,
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so
they ended up to pursue a
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different
career.
Conversely
, the professor contradicts this and contends that the
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new
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rules
and guidelines
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helped
to open
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new
job opportunities for
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archaeologists
. The lecture points out that they did much work, such as examining
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sites
, helping to preserve it, doing research, and processing the data. The speaker concludes that increasing jobs in the
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archaeology
field
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
helped
to increase the number of professional
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archaeologists
in Britain, their numbers are higher than they had ever been.
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IELTS essay tpo 16 the archaeology field declining in Britain

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
304 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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