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People should be realistic rather than romantic in order to live a better life Do you agree or disagree with the statement Use specific reasons to support your answer

People should be realistic rather than romantic in order to live a better life Use specific reasons to support your answer XGoA8
Undoubtedly, everybody has a unique atitude toward their lives, and based on that they plan their daily schadules. Having a correct and practical personality which matchs the reality of personal lifestyle is vital to help people succeed. While some people are happy with a romantic perspective toward life and think that it is a better way for living, others disagree. In my opinion, we need a real attitude toward the real condition in whcih we live. IN the following essat, I will elaborate on my reasons. To begin with, life is a reality with diverse aspects of factors through which affects our life. We see myriad diverse conditions from a cool to a harsh living environment, full of beauty and unbeauty. Having a realistic aspect of view, provides us a workeable way of thinking about our life. Through which this view, it is easier plan a practical schedule to deal with all good and bad situations. We will prepare ourselves emotionally and logically for every condition. This strategy help us to bear in any condition. For instance, when I look at my father lifestyle, through which he has made attempts to accept the reality of life, has led to have a stable and calm lifestyle in different situations. He has seen several booming and crashing period of economy and he passed all of them with the least casualties, just because of his realistic points of view, he has confessed. Moreover, having a romantic thinking cap easily end up overwhelming in harsh conditions. Most of the romantic people live on clouds, which they cann't see the real world consitions frankly. Hence, they face problelms, if the ideal atmosphere sround them changes a little bit. This uncertainty in their life won't gauruntee their success. To put it into perspective, I recall a friend of mine in college, who had a romantic lifestyle and he was very optimistic about world. He was very happy with his point of view. He enjoyed talking with girls all the day and night about litrature and love story along the semester. Finally, since he had failed to planned a real student lifestyle in his college time, he planned to fail not only in professional school life but also in his personal life. He overwhelmed when his girls friends quitted him one after one because he was not successful in his school. In conclusion, I strongly believe that havindg a realistic ppoint of view is useful and necessary to live in this fluctuating world. This is because realistic lifestyle help us to understand the reality and prepare ourselves in advance for different condition and because avoid overwhelming becasue of having a romantic attitude which ban us to plan a practical schedule for our life.
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, everybody has a unique
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atitude
toward their
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lives
, and based on that they plan their daily
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schadules
.
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Having
a correct and practical personality which
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matchs
the
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reality
of personal
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lifestyle
is vital to
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help
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people
succeed. While
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some
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people
are happy with a
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romantic
perspective toward
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life
and
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think
that it is a better way for living, others disagree. In my opinion, we need a
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real
attitude toward the
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real
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condition
in
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whcih
we
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live
. IN the following
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essat
, I will elaborate on my reasons.

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begin
with,
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life
is a
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reality
with diverse aspects of factors through which affects our
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life
. We
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see
myriad diverse conditions from a cool to a harsh living environment, full of beauty and
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unbeauty
.
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Having
a
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realistic
aspect of
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view
, provides us a
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workeable
way of thinking about our
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life
. Through which this
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view
, it is easier plan a practical schedule to deal with all
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good
and
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situations. We will prepare ourselves
emotionally
and
logically
for every
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condition
. This strategy
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help
us to bear in any
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condition
.
For instance
, when I look at my father
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lifestyle
, through which he has made attempts to accept the
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reality
of
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life
, has led to have a stable and calm
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lifestyle
in
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different
situations. He has
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seen
several booming and crashing period of
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economy and
he passed all of them with the least casualties,
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just
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because
of his
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realistic
points of
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view
, he has confessed.

Moreover
,
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having
a
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romantic
thinking cap
easily
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end
up overwhelming in harsh conditions. Most of the
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romantic
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people
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live
on clouds, which they
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cann
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world
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consitions
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problelms
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atmosphere sround
them
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. This uncertainty in their
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won't
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gauruntee
their success. To put it into perspective, I recall a friend of mine in college, who had a
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romantic
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lifestyle and
he was
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very
optimistic about world. He was
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very
happy with his point of
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view
. He enjoyed talking with girls all the day and night about
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litrature
and
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love
story along the semester.
Finally
, since he had failed
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to planned
a
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real
student
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lifestyle
in his college time, he planned to fail not
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only
in professional school
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life
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also
in his personal
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life
. He overwhelmed when his girls friends
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quitted
him one after one
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he was not successful in his school.

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realistic
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ppoint
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view
is useful and necessary to
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live
in this fluctuating world. This is
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because
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realistic
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lifestyle
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help
us to understand the
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reality
and prepare ourselves in advance for
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different
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condition
and
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avoid overwhelming
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of
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having
a
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attitude which ban us to plan a practical schedule for our
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life
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IELTS essay People should be realistic rather than romantic in order to live a better life Use specific reasons to support your answer

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
456 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
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