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Torreya taxifolia, is a type of evergreen tree that suddenly with no certain explanation stated to die.

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Torreya taxifolia, is a type of evergreen tree that suddenly with no certain explanation stated to die. The author is discussing three possible ways to address the declining Torreya population. While the professor believes that none of the author's ways are convincing. First, the text suggests that the tree should be reestablish in the same location which once it used to thrive in. However, the professor explains that there are many factors that contribute to climate changed in Florida and that reestablishing the tree there would not succeed. The professor added that because of global warming contribution to increase temperature as well as wetland through Florida is drying so fast the new environment might not be a favorable one for Torreya anymore. Second, the text states that another option for experts is to help Torreya by assisting migration, this could be done by moving the tree to totally different location which in this case will be forests further north. On the other hand, the professor thinks that result will be similar with what happen when scientist moved Black locus tree, it spread out so quickly that lead to the death of other endangered plants and trees in this new location. Finally, the text suggests that moving Torreya to be preserved in research centers, where it could be closely monitored. However, the professor affirms that if Torreya was to move from wild to a research center, the population will not be able to meet the criteria required from any population in order to face diseases, which are large and genetically diverse population. He added that a preserved population will not be able to survive in the long run.
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Torreya
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taxifolia
, is a type of evergreen
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tree
that
suddenly
with no certain explanation stated to
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die
. The author is discussing three possible ways to address the declining
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Torreya
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population
.
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While
the
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professor
believes that none of the author's ways are convincing.

First
, the text suggests that the
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tree
should be
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reestablish
in the same location which once it
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used
to thrive in.
However
, the
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professor
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explains
that there are
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many
factors that contribute to climate
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changed
in Florida and that reestablishing the
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tree
there would not succeed. The
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professor
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added
that
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because
of global warming contribution to increase temperature
as well
as wetland through Florida is drying
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so
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fast
the new environment might not be a favorable one for
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Torreya
anymore.

Second, the text states that another option for experts is to
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help
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Torreya
by assisting migration, this could
be done
by moving the
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tree
to
totally
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different
location which
in this case
will be forests
further
north.
On the other hand
, the
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professor
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thinks
that result will be similar with what happen when scientist
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moved
Black locus
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tree
, it spread out
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so
quickly
that lead to the death of other endangered plants and
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trees
in this new location.

Finally
, the text suggests that moving
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Torreya
to
be preserved
in research centers, where it could be
closely
monitored.
However
, the
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professor
affirms that if
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Torreya
was to
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move
from wild to a research center, the
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population
will not be able to
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meet
the criteria required from any
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population
in order to face diseases, which are large and
genetically
diverse
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population
. He
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added
that a preserved
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population
will not be able to survive in the long run.
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IELTS essay Torreya taxifolia, is a type of evergreen tree that suddenly with no certain explanation stated to die.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
277 words
6.0
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