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Fight or flight

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The reading passage explains how the deeply rooted reflexes of human beings to stressful situations lead to specific behaviors, which is categorized as fight or flight responses. It indicates that while hunting a game was accompanied by aggressive behaviors and adrenalin rush, facing a thread such as a wild carnivore would elicit fast fleeing. Although, the listening endorsed parts of the information provided by the passage, it undermines some other parts as below. For the beginning, the professor says stress responses do not happen the same way among the male and the female. While men get involved in fight or flight responses, the women express tend or befriend ones. It means that men primarily react to the problem by becoming aggressive or becoming suppressed. On the other hand, women’s reactions could be either solving the problem individually or seeking for external helps. This is one of the major differences between the opposite sexes in stressful circumstances. According to the lecture, women are willing to get calm down and use their verbal skills to communicate. However, men have a tendency to verbally attack the others. The passage highlighted that in fight and flight condition, people feel angry and start bitter arguments. This is in contrast to what the lecturer mentions. Moreover, the professor asserts that when a female encounter a problem that she cannot resolve, she seeks for help. Calling a friend, and asking for a support is typical of a women in difficulties. This is contrary to what the reading claims, that says in stressful situations flight behaviors result in avoidance, drug abuse, and staying alone.
The reading passage
explains
how the
deeply
rooted reflexes of human beings to stressful situations lead to specific behaviors, which
is categorized
as fight or
flight
responses. It indicates that while hunting a game
was accompanied
by aggressive behaviors and adrenalin rush, facing a thread such as a wild carnivore would elicit
fast
fleeing. Although, the listening endorsed parts of the information provided by the passage, it undermines
some
other parts as below.

For the beginning, the professor says
stress
responses do not happen the same way among the male and the female. While
men
get
involved in fight or
flight
responses, the
women
express tend or befriend ones. It means that
men
primarily
react to the problem by becoming aggressive or becoming suppressed.
On the other hand
,
women’s
reactions could be either solving the problem
individually
or seeking for external
helps
. This is one of the major differences between the opposite sexes in stressful circumstances.

According to the lecture,
women
are willing to
get
calm down and
use
their verbal
skills
to communicate.
However
,
men
have a tendency to
verbally
attack the others. The passage highlighted that in fight and
flight
condition,
people
feel angry and
start
bitter arguments. This is
in contrast
to what the lecturer mentions.

Moreover
, the professor asserts that when a female encounter a problem that she cannot resolve, she seeks for
help
. Calling a friend, and asking for a support is typical of a
women
in difficulties. This is contrary to what the reading claims, that says in stressful situations
flight
behaviors result in avoidance, drug abuse, and staying alone.
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IELTS essay Fight or flight

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
266 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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