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Based on the Taichung Fourth Market, nearly 110㎡ for each floor, design for office rooms, dining space, commercial spaces are reqiuired. Additionally, the designer had to choose an industry for this building to re-flourish the neighborhood reasonably. To achieve the goal, site analysis was necessary. With the data collected around the site for a period, I considered the connection between the old building and modern society carefully. After a analysis, I intergrated the information below: I. Observation form modern people: Awarness of health is enhanced gradually. II. Investigations from site's neighborhood. Having Benefit for promoting traditional treatments. III. Notes of conditions from the site building: orientation and windows led sufficient sunlight and balconies were a merit for growing plants. Thus, medicinal herbs was my option for this project. Besides, concepts combined the elements of project. It included North-east Asian features, part of markets' characters and operation from sunlight.
Based on the Taichung Fourth Market,
nearly
110㎡ for each floor, design for office rooms, dining space, commercial spaces are
reqiuired
.
Additionally
, the designer had to choose an industry for this building to re-flourish the neighborhood
reasonably
.

To achieve the goal, site analysis was necessary. With the data collected around the site for a period, I considered the
connection between
the
old
building and modern society
carefully
.

After
a
analysis, I
intergrated
the information below:

I. Observation form modern
people
:

Awarness
of health
is enhanced
gradually
.

II. Investigations from site's neighborhood.

Having Benefit for promoting traditional

treatments
.

III. Notes of conditions from the site building:

orientation and windows led sufficient sunlight and

balconies
were a merit for growing plants.

Thus
, medicinal herbs was my option for this project.

Besides
, concepts combined the elements of project. It included North-east Asian features, part of markets' characters and operation from sunlight.
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IELTS essay topic direction for the design

Essay
  American English
13 paragraphs
148 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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