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TOPIC 3: Rich people should pay higher taxes so that poor people will have more opportunity. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

TOPIC 3: Rich people should pay higher taxes so that poor people will have more opportunity. kYx8R
It is often argue that wealth people should pay huge amount of taxes and other side untoward people would have more benefits and chances. But affulant person has more property and asset there fore they pay vast quantity of taxes but under poverty line person they will suffer to survive for their daily earning. I strongly agree with this statement because rich people they do nt have any other alternatives chances to ignore in order to they should pay taxes. To begin with, there are many reason for poor people can obtain more advantages from rich people pay taxes. Firstly, government provide all facilities for common public such as road facilities, healthcare, and etc. They do not separate who is paying higher tax and who is not paying? Secondly, our government law is provided clearly only rich people are being paid taxes it is depends on their having asset. Irrefutably every ministry is runned people tax. For example, Indian government is provided laws and regulation for their civilians which is annual income less then sixty thousand earn who people they do not pay any taxes. Moreover, rich people is helped to develop the country which is paying more taxes. There fore rulling party can provide all best fecilities for their resident other side richless people are being used whole facilities without paying taxes. For example, developed countries rules are very strict compare than asian part such as taxes. their all people should pay for tax not only the wealth person but also poor person too. To conclude, inevitably affulant folks are being paid massive amount of taxes in order to would get more chances to untoward public without paying taxes. However, tax is only for country development purpose so any one will give that who rich people. Moreover, the government law must change in the future such as all people should pay taxes this means how much quantity of asset they having and annual earning -based too. Weather minimum amount or maximum it does not matter.
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argue that wealth
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people
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huge amount of
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taxes
and other side untoward
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people
would have more benefits and chances.
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But
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affulant
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person
has more property and asset
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there fore
they
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pay
vast quantity of
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taxes
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but
under poverty line
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person
they will suffer to survive for their daily earning. I
strongly
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agree
with this statement
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because
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rich
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people
they do
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nt
have any other alternatives chances to
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ignore
in order to they should
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pay
taxes.

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begin
with, there are
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for poor
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people
can obtain more advantages from
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rich
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people
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pay
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taxes
.
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,
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government
provide all facilities for common public such as road facilities, healthcare,
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. They do not separate
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who
is
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paying
higher
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tax
and
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who
is not
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paying
?
Secondly
, our
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government
law
is provided
clearly
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only
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rich
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people
are
being paid
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taxes
it is depends on their having asset.
Irrefutably
every ministry is
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runned
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people
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tax
.
For example
, Indian
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government
is provided
laws and regulation for their civilians which is annual income less
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then
sixty thousand earn
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who
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people
they do not
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pay
any taxes.

Moreover
,
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rich
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people
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is
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helped
to develop the country which is
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paying
more
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taxes
.
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There fore
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rulling
party can provide all best
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fecilities
for their resident other side
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richless
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people
are being
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used
whole facilities without
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paying
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taxes
.
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,
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developed countries
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rules
are
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very
strict compare than
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asian
part such as
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taxes
.
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their
all
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people
should
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pay
for
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not
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only
the wealth
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person
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also
poor
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person
too.

To conclude
,
inevitably
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affulant
folks are
being paid
massive amount of
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taxes
in order to would
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get
more chances to untoward public without
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paying
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taxes
.
However
,
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is
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only
for country development purpose
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so
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any one
will give that
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who
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rich
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people
.
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, the
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government
law
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must
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change
in the future such as all
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people
should
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pay
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taxes
this means how much quantity of asset
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they having
and annual earning -based too. Weather minimum amount or maximum it does not matter.
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IELTS essay TOPIC 3: Rich people should pay higher taxes so that poor people will have more opportunity.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
336 words
6.0
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