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In this set of material, the reading and listening is both about Air purifiers. The article strongly postulates that airpurifiers are of paramount importance to remove air pollution, and provide three extensively used types of airpurifiers. On the other hand, the lecturer mentions that these air purifiers are not as effective as described each has a shortcoming, and gainsays each of them. First and foremost, the writer begins by asserting that Hepa filters can remove the allergens since they have folded fibre sheeth that can entraps the dust particles and pollens. As a result secondary pollution cannot produce. The lecturer refutes this claim by stating that hepa filters can not ger rid of the extremely smaller particles. He exemplifies that by pollutants particles, allergens ane viruses who are samller than. 03mm, they can easily escape from hepa filter. As a result thet grow and multiply in the air and continue to cause air pollution. Hence, hepa filters are notb effective. Furthermore, the speaker posits that ozone gnerating air purifiers are dangerous to many extent. To be more specific, if the concentration of ozone is increased to diminish the smell, it would cause serious reaction to the eyes, and also affect the lungs and other body parts of humans. He goes on saying that it affect would be similar to the gasoline which is highly toxic. These claims clearly refutes the writer implication that ozone generating purifiers would be great as they use ozone which produce pleasent smell and purify the air from toxins. Ultimately, the writers wraps up its argument by declaring that UV purifiers have the benefit that they kill the bacterial production and clean the environment without producing much noise. Not surprisingly, the speaker takes an issue with that by contending that uv filters can not clear away the dust and other harmful molecules. For instance, cigarettes smoke and other gasses would still not be cleared away. Consequently, their puprpose of removing basic dust particles from air would not be fulfilled.
In this set of material, the reading and listening is both about
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Air
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purifiers
. The article
strongly
postulates that
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airpurifiers
are of paramount importance to remove
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air
pollution, and provide three
extensively
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used
types of
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airpurifiers
. On the
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other
hand, the lecturer mentions that these
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air
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purifiers
are not as effective as
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described
each has a shortcoming, and gainsays each of them.

First
and foremost, the writer
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begins
by asserting that
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Hepa
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filters
can remove the allergens since they have folded
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fibre
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sheeth
that can entraps the dust
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particles
and
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pollens
.
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As
a result secondary pollution cannot produce. The lecturer refutes this claim by stating that
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hepa
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filters
can not
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ger
rid of the
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extremely smaller
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particles
. He exemplifies that by pollutants
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particles
,
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allergens ane
viruses who are
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samller
than.
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03mm
, they can
easily
escape from
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hepa
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filter
.
As a result
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thet
grow and multiply in the
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air
and continue to cause
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air
pollution.
Hence
,
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hepa
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filters
are
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notb
effective.

Furthermore
, the speaker posits that ozone
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gnerating
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air
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purifiers
are
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dangerous
to
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many extent
. To be more specific, if the concentration of ozone
is increased
to diminish the smell, it would cause serious reaction to the eyes, and
also
affect the lungs and
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other
body parts of humans. He goes on saying that it affect would be similar to the gasoline which is
highly
toxic. These claims
clearly
refutes the writer implication that ozone generating
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purifiers
would be great as they
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use
ozone which produce
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pleasent
smell and purify the
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air
from toxins.

Ultimately
, the writers wraps up its argument by declaring that UV
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purifiers
have the benefit that they kill the bacterial production and clean the environment without producing much noise. Not
surprisingly
, the speaker takes an issue with that by contending that
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uv
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filters
can not
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clear
away the dust and
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other
harmful molecules.
For instance
, cigarettes smoke and
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other
gasses would
still
not
be cleared
away.
Consequently
, their
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puprpose
of removing basic dust
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particles
from
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air
would not
be fulfilled
.

IELTS essay TOEFLbank airfilters

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
333 words
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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