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Today, the high sales of popular consumer goods reflect the power of advertising and not the real needs of the society in which they are sold. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Today, the high sales of popular consumer goods reflect the power of advertising and not the real needs of the society in which they are sold. JWwj
Nowadays, the major sales of well-known user wares express the significance of advertisement and not the actual necessities of the society in which they are on sale. This essay agrees that well-organised advertisement is the key factor in the maximum sales of famous goods. Firstly, this essay will discuss that the attraction from advertising is pleased by people depending on a lot of ranges of any consignment, and secondly it will give information on how quickly people are aware of desired goods. On the one hand, it is inevitable that propagation in all fields is essential, and they can contribute to other successes in this branch. Promotion is absolutely impressive stimulus that is not only for local people, but also for foreigners. Consequently, this procedure can led to increase the quality of output. To the fact that advertisements can certainly tempt people to buy products that they might not otherwise want. For instance, BBC in 2019 reported emphasizing that 7 of 10 people who watch announcement either on television or in street pick out publicizing products regularly. On the other hand, advertising can boost the sales for several reasons. Indeed, to get information about a number of consumer goods in a short period is another necessary issue in promotion. Furthermore, advertising also makes the products much easier and faster to be accessed by the people across the world. We come across such kind of cases a lot during our daily life. For example, Apple launches new products to the world by airing the live show, and doing advertisement on television globally. In conclusion, I agree that the role of advertising has significantly increased and this perception is beneficial both on choice of variety of goods in the same time and on not wasting our time merely searching good quality product thoroughly.
Nowadays, the major
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sales
of well-known user wares express the significance of
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advertisement
and not the actual necessities of the society in which they are on
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sale
. This essay
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agrees
that
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well-organised
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advertisement
is the key factor in the maximum
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sales
of
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famous
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goods
.
Firstly
, this essay will discuss that the attraction from advertising is
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pleased
by
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people
depending on
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a lot of
ranges of any consignment, and
secondly
it will give information on how
quickly
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people
are aware of desired
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goods
.

On the one hand, it is inevitable that propagation in all fields is essential, and they can contribute to other successes in this branch. Promotion is
absolutely
impressive stimulus
that is
not
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only
for local
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people
,
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but
also
for foreigners.
Consequently
, this procedure can led to increase the quality of output. To the fact that
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advertisements
can
certainly
tempt
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people
to
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buy
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products
that they might not
otherwise
want.
For instance
, BBC in 2019 reported emphasizing that 7 of 10
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people
who
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watch
announcement either on television or in street pick out publicizing
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products
regularly
.

On the other hand
, advertising can boost the
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sales
for several reasons.
Indeed
, to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
information about a number of consumer
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goods
in a short period is another necessary issue in promotion.
Furthermore
, advertising
also
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makes
the
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products
much easier and faster to
be accessed
by the
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people
across the world. We
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come
across such kind of cases a lot during our daily life.
For example
, Apple launches new
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products
to the world by airing the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
live
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
show
, and doing
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advertisement
on television globally.

In conclusion
, I
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agree
that the role of advertising has
significantly
increased and this perception is beneficial both on choice of variety of
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goods
in the same time and on not wasting our time
merely
searching
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good
quality
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product
thoroughly
.
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IELTS essay Today, the high sales of popular consumer goods reflect the power of advertising and not the real needs of the society in which they are sold.

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4 paragraphs
301 words
6.5
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