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Today people are using the things and throwing or replacing it with latest models or latest fashion. Do the disadvantages of throwing away society out weigh any possible economic advantage. Give reasons and example.

the world has been suffering from the burning issue of global warning which has plays a significant role in global problems, mainly as the result of increasing traffic mishaps and pollution. the government should take conscious steps to resolved by hiking the price of petrol which could be one of the solution but still controversial. Firstly, I agree with it because the government should increase the price of petrol then the cost of transportation increases. people are not more uses of vehicles and use public transport. that is beneficial for the government as well as a decrease in the rate of pollution. people do not go with the vehicle for a short distance they go by walk and that can improve our health. moreover, people would be using a CNG and electric option fules. after that pollution will automatically decrease day by day. secondly, some of the aspects that the government should not take this step then increase in public transportation also poor public transport frequency. people are using more vehicles then pollution will be increased. materialisation is in aggressive mode. the company will more efficient to make new and sell in the market. for instance, the company launch a new bike with a lower price and the bike gives a good average then people will also attractive to buy this bike. finally, in conclusion, the government should a hiking price of petrol but people should be understood and use more public transportation.
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world has been suffering from the burning issue of global warning which has plays a significant role in global problems,
mainly
as the result of increasing traffic mishaps and
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pollution
.
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the
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government
should take conscious steps to resolved by hiking the
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price
of petrol which could be one of the solution
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still
controversial.

Firstly
, I
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the
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government
should increase the
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price
of petrol then the cost of transportation increases.
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people
are not more
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uses
of vehicles and
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use
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public
transport.
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that
is beneficial for the
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government
as well
as a decrease in the rate of
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pollution
.
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people
do not
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go with
the vehicle for a short distance they go by walk and that can
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improve
our health.

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moreover
,
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people
would be using a CNG and electric option
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fules
.
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after
that
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pollution
will
automatically
decrease day by day.

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secondly
,
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some
of the aspects that the
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government
should not take this step then increase in
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public
transportation
also
poor
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public
transport frequency.
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people
are using
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more vehicles then
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pollution
will
be increased
.
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materialisation
is in aggressive mode.
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the
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company
will more efficient to
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make
new and sell in the market.
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for
instance, the
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company
launch a new bike with a lower
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price
and the bike gives a
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good
average then
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people
will
also
attractive to
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buy
this bike.

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finally
,
in conclusion
, the
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government
should a hiking
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price
of
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petrol
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people
should
be understood
and
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more
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public
transportation.
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IELTS essay Today people are using the things and throwing or replacing it with latest models or latest fashion. Do the disadvantages of throwing away society out weigh any possible economic advantage. Give reasons and example.

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