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.Fresh water has become a global problem for the world. What are the causes of it? What measures government and individual should take to resolve to the problem? Give reasons and e.g. for your answer.

The world has been suffering from the burning issue of global warming which has plays a significant role in global problems, mainly as the result of increasing pollution, the government and individual should take a conscious step to resolve. in this essay, I would talk about which are reasons, how to government take steps on the individual. Firstly, the main problem is gaining population day by day globally and continues to increase deforestation. nowadays increase the number of industrialisation and factory emissions. all people are not educated as they have a lack of disciple. sewage management work has not properly placed on all sector that's why to overflow sewage anywhere and pollution created. for instance, today's world all nation to show the power to do nuclear tests and increase pollution. secondly, the government first aware of pollution and do some campaign about pollution. the government should take steps in this chapter. however, the government should make rules and regulations for all people. those who have a crack rule it should be fined. people should use the eco-friendly product and also celebrate environmental days, eco-friendly festival. it has awakened people. an individual should support the government and maintain self-discipline. people should come uses of fullest car and more use of bicycle that why pollution is a lowering in the world. lastly, in conclusion, people should follow the government rule and laws. plastic should use as little as possible and use the paper
The world has been suffering from the burning issue of global warming which has

plays a significant role in global problems,
mainly
as the result of increasing

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pollution
, the
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government
and individual should take a conscious step to resolve.
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in
this essay, I would talk about which are reasons, how to
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government
take steps on the individual.

Firstly
, the main problem is gaining population day by day globally and continues to increase deforestation.
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nowadays
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increase
the number of
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industrialisation
and factory emissions.
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all
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people
are not educated as they have
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a lack of disciple
.
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sewage
management work has not
properly
placed on all sector that's why to overflow sewage anywhere and
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pollution
created.
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for
instance,
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today
's world all nation to
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show
the power to do nuclear
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tests
and increase pollution.

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secondly
, the
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government
first
aware of
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pollution
and do
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some
campaign about
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pollution
.
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the
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government
should take steps in this chapter.
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however
, the
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government
should
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make
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rules
and regulations for all
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people
.
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those
who have a crack
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rule
it should
be fined
.
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people
should
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use
the eco-friendly product and
also
celebrate environmental days, eco-friendly festival.
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it
has awakened
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people
.
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an
individual should support the
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government
and maintain self-discipline.

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people
should
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come
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uses
of
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fullest
car and more
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use
of bicycle that why
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pollution
is a lowering in the world.

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lastly
,
in conclusion
,
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people
should follow the
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government
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rule
and laws.
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plastic
should
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use
as
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little
as possible and
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use
the
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paper
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IELTS essay . Fresh water has become a global problem for the world. What are the causes of it? What measures government and individual should take to resolve to the problem? Give reasons and e. g. for your answer.

Essay
  American English
6 paragraphs
240 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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