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Today more people traveling than ever before

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Nowadays most of the countries accept globalization, It open opportunities to the investor to spread there business around the world. As a result, Lot of people getting jobs, and it gives opportunities to travel from one place to another. Most of the people move from village to town\city to improve there financial situations. It leads to dense population in the cities and towns consequently cost of living also high. To compensate these people stay outside of the town\city and they willing to travel to their working places. Development of since helped in transportation as well, All the countries try to adopt and implement the new discoveries through public and private transportation. It helped people to travel easily and economically. Compare to past now travelling time reduced lot. Because of financial need and travelling opportunities today more people traveling than ever before. Early in my career I worked in small town. Due to my financial need and eager to learn new things, I requested my company human resource to gave opportunities to work in abroad branch. My HR agreed to transfer to Singapore branch because of my past achievements. Now I have been working in Singapore branch for last 11 years, Every day I use public transport MRT to travel from my residence to office and from office to customer places due to nature of my work. Every six month I travel to my home town in India. Traveling time is just over four hours only consequently it helped to travel whenever necessary.
Nowadays most of the countries accept globalization, It open
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opportunities
to the investor to spread there business around the world.
As a result
, Lot of
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people
getting jobs, and it gives
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opportunities
to
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travel
from one place to another. Most of the
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people
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move
from village to town\city to
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improve
there financial situations. It leads to dense population in the cities and towns
consequently
cost of living
also
high. To compensate these
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people
stay
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outside of
the town\
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city and
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they willing
to
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travel
to their working places.

Development of since
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helped
in transportation
as well
, All the countries try to adopt and implement the new discoveries through public and private transportation. It
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helped
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people
to
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travel
easily
and
economically
. Compare to past
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now
travelling time
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reduced
lot.
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Because
of financial need and travelling
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opportunities
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today
more
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people
traveling than ever
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before
.

Early in my career I worked in
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small
town. Due to my financial need and eager to learn new things, I requested my
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company
human resource to gave
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opportunities
to work in abroad branch. My HR
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agreed
to transfer to Singapore branch
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because
of my past achievements.
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Now
I have been working in Singapore branch for last 11 years, Every day I
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use
public transport MRT to
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travel
from my residence to office and from office to customer places due to nature of my work. Every six month I
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travel
to my home town in India. Traveling time is
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just
over four hours
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only
consequently
it
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helped
to
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travel
whenever necessary.
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IELTS essay Today more people traveling than ever before

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
252 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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