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Write a story about a memorable journey/holiday that went very well OR very badly.

Write a story about a memorable journey/holiday that went very well OR very badly. Nlx70
Last summer, my parents allowed me to go to Da Lat with my best friends after a hard semester. There are seven people: four boys (including my crush) and three girls. We had a lot of beautiful memories and It made an impression on me. We decided to go on our motorbikes so that we can see more beautiful landscapes and take some pictures anyway. The weather was luckily still cool at that time, the atmosphere was so clean and fresh during that summer. We stayed in a homestay with no air-conditional for 3 days and 2 nights. Then we went to some spectacular places such as: Love Valley, Dambri waterfall, especially a top of LangBiang where I got confessed to be a couple with my crush
Last summer, my parents
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allowed
me to go to
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Da
Lat with my best friends after a
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hard
semester. There are seven
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people
: four boys (including my crush) and three girls. We had
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a lot of
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beautiful
memories and It made an impression on me. We decided to go on our motorbikes
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so
that we can
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see
more
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beautiful
landscapes and take
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some
pictures anyway. The weather was luckily
still
cool at that time, the atmosphere was
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so
clean and fresh during that summer. We stayed in a homestay with no air-conditional for 3 days and 2 nights. Then we went to
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some
spectacular places such as:
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Love
Valley,
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Dambri
waterfall,
especially
a top of
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LangBiang
where I
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got
confessed to be a couple with my
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crush
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IELTS essay Write a story about a memorable journey/holiday that went very well OR very badly.

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
126 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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