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Today more people are travelling than ever before ?why?what are the benefits.

Today more people are travelling than ever before? why? what are the benefits. QKWPX
Nowdays travelling is become more popular as compared to the past. there are various reasons why it is happening and this situation has much more benefits. More people are going abroad trips for the following reasons. one of the reason is to getting a better education. These days, many students are in the developing countries study beacause there many school and university of higher quality. For example most of the top ranked Universities in the world are located like USA, UK, CANADA, GERMANY, SINGAPUR. In instance people may need to go on a business trips overseas, Beacause we oive in global world which person working for multinational company they need to travel another country for work. Also some businessman and entrepreneur travel other countries for expand their business. There are serval benefits for people who travel overseas. In the first place, they gain valuable experience throughout time abroad. for example people are introduce different culture and customs when visiting and living in another country. It is make them broad minded. Many more people also make friends from different countries. In conclusion, People go abroad nowadays they receive a better education vor to do business. it is recommended they everyone should taking trip oversea once their life.
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are various reasons why it is happening and this situation has much more benefits. More
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are going abroad trips for the following reasons.
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of the reason is
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study
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beacause
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and university of higher quality.
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like USA
, UK, CANADA, GERMANY,
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may need to go on a business trips overseas,
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in global world which person working for multinational
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they need to travel another
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for work.
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businessman and entrepreneur travel other
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for expand their business. There are
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people
who travel overseas. In the
first
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culture and customs when visiting and living in another
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broad minded
.
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go abroad nowadays they receive a better education
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IELTS essay Today more people are travelling than ever before? why? what are the benefits.

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