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Can Ebooks replace traditional books

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Recently paper back books and traditional newspapers are being discarded and replaced by advanced tablets and electronic books. In this essay we will address to what extent Ebooks could replace classic books. In the past books were published and put in bookstores. Booklovers would pay a special visit to the bookstore to purchase their favorite new book. Sometimes a trip to the bookstore is a hustle with the busy lifestyle nowadays, so many of them have retreated to simply ordering the book online and reading it off their smartphone or tablet. Ebooks have become a part of our daily life. Less paper, less harm to the environment! The use of plenty of paper for daily newspaper has been cutdown by more than half! Saving plenty of trees from being cutdown. I believe that in the near future Ebooks could completely replace traditional newspapers and magazines.
Recently paper back
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and traditional newspapers are
being discarded
and replaced by advanced tablets and electronic
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books
. In this essay we will address to what extent
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Ebooks
could replace classic books.

In the past
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books
were published
and put in bookstores.
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Booklovers
would pay a special visit to the bookstore to
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purchase
their favorite new
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book
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Sometimes
a trip to the bookstore is a hustle with the busy lifestyle nowadays,
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so
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many
of them have retreated to
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ordering the
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book
online and reading it off their smartphone or tablet.
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Ebooks
have become a part of our daily life.

Less paper, less harm to the environment! The
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use
of
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plenty
of paper for daily newspaper has been
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cutdown
by more than half! Saving
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of trees from being
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cutdown
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I believe that in the near future
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Ebooks
could completely replace traditional newspapers and magazines.
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IELTS essay Can Ebooks replace traditional books

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