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Today more people are travelling than ever before. Why is this the case? What are the benefits of travelling for the traveller?

People are travelling than before for several reasons I have chosen to talk about nowadays technology makes us very easier than before, people can buy a ticket from online within 15 or 20 minutes, furthermore, when people travel to different places, they can use their credit card and MasterCard, as well as book taxi from the apps Western majority people mostly like to travel different countries every year, the elder couple and younger too, wanted to visit every year in different places, technology makes us greatly easier nowadays. In the past, travelling was a fantasy because at that time wasn't any easier way to journey. The majority of the population travelling to different countries and places there include lots of advantages they can be watching natural places, as well as they, can knowing the tradition of different countries.

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