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Today , more and more people use robots to do their work at home

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In our modern era, robots and these kinds of technologies are used to do houseworks by a myriad of people, as everything has two sides, modern technologies also have pros and cons. Technologies have a myriad of positive sides, for instance, it saves our time. than we can do another useful work. For instance, while robots are cooking meal, we can clean our house or we can have a rest. It is so amazing chance and prevents fatigue. Those are positive and useful sides of modern technologies. Now I'm gonna to write about robots and fashionable technologies' negative effects. Ever though robots can help a lot but modern technologies make people lazy. Pearly of well known people think that person should use them, but not much. Than robots cannot be disadvantagable for individuals
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IELTS essay Today, more and more people use robots to do their work at home

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132 words
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