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Nowadays, a lot of offices employ open-space designs instead of separate rooms for work.

Nowadays, a lot of offices employ open-space designs instead of separate rooms for work. 52E6B
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world
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foakes
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people
to explore For
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pastures. At a present, almost
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employes
prefer to
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working
in a large
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,
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Lessay
established both merits and demerits.

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with, nowadays, all worker choice
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for open
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because
all
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peoples
is sociable by nature.
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as
well as always
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helpfull
in
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work
. In
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word, if all employ
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work
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get
together then
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work
is finish
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fast
and perfect. Apart from that, then on they are not feel boring. For
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illustarion
, tesla owner is always
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prefer
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under take
a
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work
with group and open cred
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, this reason to know about
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diffrent
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ideas
for
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mind. To weld,
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knew about ability for workers.
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,
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ce
tusk complete in short time
as well
as this
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, this reason to the most workers prefer
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good
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side, few
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people
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think
separate
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is the best
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because
in
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work
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privetly
this reason to. In
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high
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celgory
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in
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theser
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works is
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vital to catch
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as well
as information about country.
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devote a
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sepurite
room for
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for IPS, IAS and
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. Jobs.
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, on
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vice in their
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metter
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diffrent
type of methodology. More over,
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,
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few
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people
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, at a glance, in open-area much more advantages Compare to separate roomy or cabin.
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choice to open-area for
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IELTS essay Nowadays, a lot of offices employ open-space designs instead of separate rooms for work.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
290 words
5.5
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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