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Today computer is considered as life of human beings. Some people say that these computers are not useful in learning things. Do you agree or disagree with the statement.

Today computer is considered as life of human beings. Some people say that these computers are not useful in learning things. JoqMa
In this burgeoning domain, due to modernisation, masses are becoming dependent on the new technology as mobile phones, computers, and many more. Now-a-days computers are becoming a part of society as these are surpassed for human society. Some folks believe that these electronic gadgets are not useful in learning things efficiently. I disagree with the statement. In the beginning, all the aspects of our life are influenced by electronic machines. Electronic gadgets are good sources of enhancing the offsprings area of knowledge. For example, my sibling is using mobile phones, with the help of these he upgraded his knowledge. So, electronic gadgets are lucrative for students to overcome from their studies problems. In addition to it, now-a-days, electronic gadgets are providing mammoth of social sites through which we can stay connected with chums and kith and kins who are living a far away from us, as well as we can save our data in a computer. Some people assert that, thinking machine has various negative effects on kid's physical and mental development as children use electronic gadgets which involves sedentary. So that, they are becoming obese as well as computer makes the kid's eyesight poor. To be re-capitulate, the use of electronic machine has positive as well as negative effects and both are right on their sides, but my opinion is that electronic machines are lucrative for us as now we are living in the modern Geographical era, now every work depends on electronic gadget and it is considered as social status as well as computers are a good source of amusement which can refresh our mind. So, electronic gadgets are beneficial in our society. Now, the thinking machine is in vogue.
In this burgeoning domain, due to
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modernisation
, masses are becoming dependent on the new technology as mobile phones, computers, and
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many
more.
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Now
-a-days computers are becoming a part of society as these
are surpassed
for human society.
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Some
folks believe that these
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electronic
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gadgets
are not useful in learning things
efficiently
. I disagree with the statement.

In the beginning, all the aspects of our life
are influenced
by
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electronic
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machines
.
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Electronic
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gadgets
are
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good
sources of enhancing the
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offsprings
area of knowledge.
For example
, my sibling is using mobile phones, with the
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help
of these he upgraded his knowledge.
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So
,
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electronic
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gadgets
are lucrative for students to overcome from their studies problems.

In addition
to it,
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now
-a-days,
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electronic
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gadgets
are providing mammoth of social sites through which we can stay connected with chums and kith and
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kins
who are living a far away from us, as
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well
as we can save our data in a computer.

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Some
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people
assert that, thinking
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machine
has various
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negative
effects on kid's physical and mental development as children
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use
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electronic
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gadgets
which involves sedentary.
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So
that, they are becoming obese as
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well
as computer
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makes
the kid's eyesight poor.

To be re-capitulate, the
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use
of
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electronic
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machine
has
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positive
as
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well
as
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negative
effects and both are right on their sides,
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but
my opinion is that
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electronic
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machines
are lucrative for us as
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now
we are living in the modern Geographical era,
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now
every work depends on
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electronic
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gadget
and it
is considered
as social status as
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well
as computers are a
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good
source of amusement which can refresh our mind.
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So
,
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electronic
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gadgets
are beneficial in our society.
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Now
, the thinking
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machine
is in vogue.
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IELTS essay Today computer is considered as life of human beings. Some people say that these computers are not useful in learning things.

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
282 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 7.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
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Task Achievement: 7.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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