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some people argue that there should be fixed punishment for committing a certain crime for all criminal.Others suggest that the condition is considered before declaring any punishment.Do agree with the statement?

some people argue that there should be fixed punishment for committing a certain crime for all criminal. Others suggest that the condition is considered before declaring any punishment. Do agree with the statement? qVRpX
Declaring the type of punishment to the perpetrators is one of the issues that authorities have a variety of ideas about that. Some individuals believe that penalties should be the same for all law-offenders in the certain offence, however, many people think that the situation of criminal activity should be considered for punishing. I completely agree with the give statement with the basis of control of crime rate and upbringing to a better lifestyle. To begin with, the main reason is that the type of penalty is a determining factor of reducing criminal activities. To simply put, providing that reviewers declare definite punishment for every criminal, then under no circumstances is it possible to reduce crimes, because they already introduced every guilty person as a perpetrator. Take an individual that showed aggressive behaviour for the first time as an example; convicting him or her as a law-offender and sending him to imprisonment, as a rule, not only is not more likely to control crime, but it would add a new name to the criminal list. Thus, the more flexibility in penalties for offences, the better control in the amount of them. Having said that, however, decreasing of crime is not the only crucial factor in this respect. Another causative reason is that flexibility in types of punishments is a rewarding factor for superior treating of law-offenders. That is to say, by using different methods to punish the criminals, it tends to be possible to prepare environments that guilty person learns and upbringing their aggressive behaviour. A good illustration for this is clearly shown by employing social punishments such as participate in charitable activities. Therefore, if penalties declare by considering of personality of criminals, they would be oriented to the correct lifestyle. To Conclude, I personally take the view that it is ethically unacceptable to have an equal penalty for certain offence for every criminal. This is mainly because of reducing a number of crime and guide them to a better life.
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to the perpetrators is one of the issues that authorities have a variety of
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ideas
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individuals believe that
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penalties
should be the same for all law-offenders in the certain
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offence
,
however
,
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people
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think
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criminal
activity should
be considered
for punishing. I completely
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agree
with the give statement with the basis of control of
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crime
rate and upbringing to a better lifestyle.

To
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begin
with, the main reason is that the type of
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penalty
is a determining factor of reducing
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criminal
activities. To
simply
put, providing that reviewers declare
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definite
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punishment
for every
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criminal
, then under no circumstances is it possible to
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reduce
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crimes
,
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because
they already introduced every guilty person as a perpetrator. Take an individual that
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showed
aggressive
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behaviour
for the
first
time as an example; convicting him or her as a law-offender and sending him to imprisonment, as a
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rule
, not
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is not more likely to control
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crime
,
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but
it would
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add
a new name to the
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criminal
list.
Thus
, the more flexibility in
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penalties
for
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offences
, the better control in the amount of them.

Having said that,
however
, decreasing of
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crime
is not the
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only
crucial factor in this respect. Another causative reason is that flexibility in types of
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punishments
is a rewarding factor for superior treating of law-offenders.
That is
to say, by using
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different
methods to punish the
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criminals
, it tends to be possible to prepare environments that guilty person learns and upbringing their aggressive
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behaviour
. A
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good
illustration for this is
clearly
shown by employing social
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punishments
such as participate in charitable activities.
Therefore
, if
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penalties
declare by considering of personality of
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criminals
, they would
be oriented
to the correct lifestyle.

To Conclude
, I
personally
take the view that it is
ethically
unacceptable to have an equal
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penalty
for certain
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offence
for every
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criminal
. This is
mainly
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because
of reducing a number of
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crime
and guide them to a better life.
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IELTS essay some people argue that there should be fixed punishment for committing a certain crime for all criminal. Others suggest that the condition is considered before declaring any punishment. Do agree with the statement?

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
331 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Grammatical Range: 7.0
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