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To begin with, it is 100% true that the rapid increase in the car ownership has lead to a big traffic jam.

To begin with, it is 100% true that the rapid increase in the car ownership has lead to a big traffic jam. 02W9
To begin with, it is 100% true that the rapid increase in the car ownership has lead to a big traffic jam. Why did I say that? It is simply because of some examples that have been occured widely, one of them, for instance: In Indonesia, having our own cars is a mandatory thought throughout the society. It is believes that the quality of services as long as the passangers security of the public tranport are very bad. Thus, people are more likely to use their private vehicles than public transportation. However, as the result, the amount of time that people spend for commuting is very enormous. The ussual duration from Bogor to Jakarta is just 60 minutes in the rush hours without the traffic jam, but with that occurence, the duration increases to about 120 minutes. This what we called as the big stuck.
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IELTS essay To begin with, it is 100% true that the rapid increase in the car ownership has lead to a big traffic jam.

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145 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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