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MANY PEOPLE BELIEVE THAT WE CAN USE TECHNOLOGY TO MINIMIZE THE BAD EFFECTS OF POLLUTION TO OUR ENVIRONMENT. DO YOU AGREE OR DISAGREE? WRITE ABOUT A 250 WORD ESSAY ABOUT THIS.

MANY PEOPLE BELIEVE THAT WE CAN USE TECHNOLOGY TO MINIMIZE THE BAD EFFECTS OF POLLUTION TO OUR ENVIRONMENT. WRITE ABOUT A 250 WORD ESSAY ABOUT THIS. DNyWE
Nowadays, our environment has become more and more polluted, so governments have been always looking for ways to reduce pollution. With the development of technology, it is believed that we can use technology to reduce the harmful effects of pollution on our environment. I totally agree with this opinion. First of all, I think people can use environmental technology for reduce bad effects of pollution. Environmental technology will help people to conserve, monitor or reduce the impact of pollution on the environment and the consumption of resources. For example, people can use electric vehicles. Electric vehicles have a beneficial environmental impact since they do not emit carbon dioxide, which contributes to greenhouse effect and causes global warming. They are also cleaner and less hazardous to human health, animals, plants, and water because they do not contribute to air pollution. In addition, if we use technology to minimize effects of pollution, we not only to live in healthy and fresh environment but also develop and take advantages of our economics. All in all, If people know how to use technology effectively, we can minimize our environmental pollution. People can have not only clean and fresh life but also good health.
Nowadays, our
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environment
has become more and more polluted,
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so
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governments
have been always looking for ways to
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reduce
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pollution
. With the development of
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technology
, it
is believed
that we can
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use
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technology
to
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reduce
the harmful effects of
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pollution
on our
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environment
. I
totally
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agree
with this opinion.

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people
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use
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environmental
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technology
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bad
effects of
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pollution
.
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Environmental
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technology
will
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help
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people
to conserve, monitor or
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reduce
the impact of
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pollution
on the
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environment
and the consumption of resources.
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people
can
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use
electric vehicles. Electric vehicles have a beneficial
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environmental
impact since they do not emit carbon dioxide, which contributes to greenhouse
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effect
and causes global warming. They are
also
cleaner and less hazardous to human health, animals, plants, and water
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because
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, if we
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use
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to minimize effects of
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, we not
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in healthy and fresh
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environment
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develop and take advantages of our economics.

All in all, If
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people
know how to
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use
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technology
effectively
, we can minimize our
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environmental
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pollution
.
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can have not
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clean and fresh life
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health.
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IELTS essay MANY PEOPLE BELIEVE THAT WE CAN USE TECHNOLOGY TO MINIMIZE THE BAD EFFECTS OF POLLUTION TO OUR ENVIRONMENT. WRITE ABOUT A 250 WORD ESSAY ABOUT THIS.

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