Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.
Check Your Text it's free

Throughout the history, people dream to build a perfect society while they haven’t agreed how the ideal society would be like. What is the most important element you think to make a perfect society? How do people do to achieve an ideal society?

Throughout the history, people dream to build a perfect society while they haven’t agreed how the ideal society would be like. What is the most important element you think to make a perfect society? How do people do to achieve an ideal society? R9pV
From ages, we are imaging a perfect society. But we forgot that society is nothing, but we all are society. We are making the society. The definition of society is itself so vast topic to discuss that we can consider a collection of limitless ideas won`t be enough to explain it. Still I will try to give my points on society. A definition of perfect society is the mindset of people living in the society. key elements of ideal society are Equality, no racism a place everyone have equal rights, no difference in one`s rights or facilities one need. For example, if you living somewhere, where you don`t judge a person by what he is wearing but the treatment or behavior with others. A place
From ages, we are imaging a perfect
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
society
.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
But
we forgot that
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
society
is nothing,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
we all are
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
society
. We are making the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
society
. The definition of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
society
is itself
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
vast topic to discuss that we can consider a collection of limitless
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
ideas
You used an accent character instead of an apostrophe. Please use either "won't" or "won’t".
won`t
be
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
enough
to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
explain
it.
Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Still
I will try to give my points on
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
society
. A definition of perfect
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
society
is the mindset of
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
living in the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
society
.
This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
key
elements of ideal
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
society
are Equality, no racism a place everyone
The pronoun 'everyone' is usually used with a third-person or a past tense verb: "has", "had".
have
equal rights, no difference in
The character between 'one' and 's' is an accent character, not a standard apostrophe character. Use "one’s" (curly apostrophe) or "one's" (straight apostrophe).
one`s
rights or facilities one need.
For example
, if
Did you mean "you're living", "you are living", or "you were living"?
you living
somewhere, where you
You used an accent character instead of an apostrophe. Please use either "don't" or "don’t".
don`t
judge a person by what he is wearing
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
the treatment or behavior with others. A
Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraph
place
What do you think?
  • This is funny writingFunny
  • I love this writingLove
  • This writing has blown my mindWow
  • It made me angryAngry
  • It made me sadSad

IELTS essay Throughout the history, people dream to build a perfect society while they haven’t agreed how the ideal society would be like. What is the most important element you think to make a perfect society? How do people do to achieve an ideal society?

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
124 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Labels Descriptions
  • ?
    Currently is not available
  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
Recent posts