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This set of the material in the both reading and lecture is about a fossild skeleton of a specific dinosaur, which was found in volcanic ash, called Sinosauropteryx.

This set of the material in the both reading and lecture is about a fossild skeleton of a specific dinosaur, which was found in volcanic ash, called Sinosauropteryx. AjQkn
This set of the material in the both reading and lecture is about a fossild skeleton of a specific dinosaur, which was found in volcanic ash, called Sinosauropteryx. The reading provides thre pieces of evidence indicating that patterns of fossils such as fine lines could not represent that the dinosaur had feather. The lecturer, nonetheless, refutes the author's explanations by offering three counterclaims. First, the passage posits that after dying, the animal's skin might have decomposed into fibers. Therefore, such patterns could be an indication of skin fibers. The lecturer, in contrast. . .
This set of the material in the both reading and lecture is about a
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fossild
skeleton of a specific dinosaur, which
was found
in volcanic ash, called
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Sinosauropteryx
. The reading provides
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thre
pieces of evidence indicating that patterns of fossils such as fine lines could not represent that the dinosaur had
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feather
. The lecturer, nonetheless, refutes the author's explanations by offering three counterclaims.

First
, the passage posits that after dying, the animal's skin might have decomposed into fibers.
Therefore
, such patterns could be an indication of skin fibers. The lecturer,
in contrast
.
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.
Don't put a space before the full stop
.
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IELTS essay This set of the material in the both reading and lecture is about a fossild skeleton of a specific dinosaur, which was found in volcanic ash, called Sinosauropteryx.

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  American English
2 paragraphs
94 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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