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This is Bivek Pandey, I have B.Sc. Computer Science and Information technology degree. Due to keen interest in technological field since my childhood, I was always had a positive attitude towards digitaliza

This is Bivek Pandey, I have B. Sc. Computer Science and Information technology degree. Due to keen interest in technological field since my childhood, I was always had a positive attitude towards digitaliza BL1MV
This is Bivek Pandey, I have B. Sc. Computer Science and Information technology degree. Due to keen interest in technological field since my childhood, I was always had a positive attitude towards digitalization and innovation. I was even good at my academics, because of that I also got scholarship in higher secondary school level provided by HSEB(Higher Secondary Education Board). After successful completion of higher secondary level in science stream, I decided to persueing my career as IT professional. So, In 2015, I joined the four year( eight semester) degree programme B. Sc. Computer Science and Information Technology in Nagarjuna College of Infromation Technology, which is affiliated under Tribhuvan University. By 2019 I successfully completed particular course with 69. 69 percentage, which can be considered preety impressive grades according to Tribhuvan University’s grading scale.
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Bivek
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Pandey
, I have
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B. Sc.
Computer Science and Information technology degree. Due to keen interest in technological field since my childhood, I was always had a
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positive
attitude towards digitalization and innovation. I was even
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at my academics,
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of that I
also
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got
scholarship in higher secondary school level provided by
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HSEB
(Higher Secondary Education Board). After successful completion of higher secondary level in science stream, I decided to
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persueing
my career as IT professional.
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So
, In 2015, I
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joined
the four year
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eight semester) degree
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programme
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B. Sc.
Computer Science and Information Technology in
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Nagarjuna
College of
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Infromation
Technology, which
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Tribhuvan
University. By 2019 I
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