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Think about last week including where you went and what you did at home. Write a paragraph about things which happended to you, your family, or your friends during the weekend.

Think about last week including where you went and what you did at home. Write a paragraph about things which happended to you, your family, or your friends during the weekend. obeOb
Last week, I was engulfed in sad poems, suddenly my close friend called me to ask me to go for a walk. Obviously, I would make a date with her. The date was on Thursday afternoon, I waited pantiently outside in light of her being late. After ten minutes of waiting, she arrived and we surely went to our favorite restaurant as we planned before but unfortunately it was closed that day. So we went to a famous milk tea shop as usual, the drink was really sweet and benificial for my mental health.
Last week, I
was engulfed
in sad poems,
suddenly
my close friend called me to ask me to go for a walk.
Obviously
, I would
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make
a date with her. The date was on Thursday afternoon, I waited
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pantiently
outside in light of her being late. After ten minutes of waiting, she
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arrived and
we
surely
went to our favorite restaurant as we planned
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before
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but
unfortunately it
was closed
that day.
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So
we went to a
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famous
milk tea shop as usual, the drink was
really
sweet and
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benificial
for my mental health.
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IELTS essay Think about last week including where you went and what you did at home. Write a paragraph about things which happended to you, your family, or your friends during the weekend.

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
94 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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