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Things like puzzles, board games and pictures can contribute to a child’s development. What would you give a child to help him/her develop and why? Give details and examples in your explanation.

Things like puzzles, board games and pictures can contribute to a child’s development. What would you give a child to help him/her develop and why? Give details and examples in your explanation. 6x6bW
It is irrefutable that, Brain games could increase overall brain performance and develop intelligence in children. There are certain types of games are available which helps in cognitive development of children. Games like Rubik's cube, chess, brain riddles, and image puzzle can help lad in overall brain power function. I further elaborate my views in upcoming paragraphs. Games like Rubik's cube and chess build up good memory in children. From the chess a child can learn fundamentals of planning from the tender age. As epitome, In the game of chess a player has to create a strategy to defeat the opponent and for that the player has to play various moves and think aptly to confuse the opponent and to win the game. So for all this process the player has to think from many different angles. So the chess take children's thinking ability to the next level. Ine augments, the games like brainy riddles and image puzzle developed imagination in children. brainy riddles could be great exercise for the brain as child has to find out the answers and image puzzle games helps in development of memory power in child. after contemplating all the aspects, various brain games increase overall brain function in children and could develop their personality and performance so, it is always advisable for children to play such games.
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IELTS essay Things like puzzles, board games and pictures can contribute to a child’s development. What would you give a child to help him/her develop and why? Give details and examples in your explanation.

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