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These days tourism has created a number of environment problems.what are these problems? Discuss some solutions?

These days tourism has created a number of environment problems. what are these problems? Discuss some solutions? 3MJlN
Tourism industry becomes a biggest economic development of a country. globalisation makes the whole world a single unit therefore people usually travel to different places however these also cause many problems. The following paragraph intends to shed some light on the problems and solutions. To commence with the problems the first one is pollution which is of four types mainly which totally effects the environment due to which health of people suffers. another one is, technology due to which tourism is possible there are many things developing under technology which in may damage the nature of an earth. for instance deforestation, more and more use of natural resources. moreover these tourism creates the problem of traffic congestion due to which people have to face lot of problems. To contrast with the solutions of these problems the first one is that these companies should use the vehicles which creates less pollution which is possible due to applied science. The second one is that if they have to setup their industries than they should use as much as space required. The third one is that they should arrange their tours according to traffic people for example, if there is bus and people are three in it than its completely waste of time and money they should offer them cars or what they have for less passenger. In conclusion, if there is merit of something then it is very common that the thing has demerits also therefore if anything creates problems than there solutions are also there but a once have to find it.
Tourism industry becomes
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a
biggest economic development of a country.
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globalisation
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makes
the whole world a single unit
therefore
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people
usually
travel to
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different
places
however
these
also
cause
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many
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problems
. The following paragraph intends to shed
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some
light on the
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problems
and solutions.

To commence with the
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problems
the
first
one is pollution which is of four types
mainly
which
totally
effects the environment
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due
to which health of
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people
suffers.
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another
one is, technology
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due
to which tourism is possible there are
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many
things developing under technology which in may damage the nature of an earth.
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for
instance deforestation, more and more
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use
of natural resources.
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moreover
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these tourism
creates the
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problem
of traffic congestion
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due
to which
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people
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have to
face
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lot of
problems.

To contrast with the solutions of these
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problems
the
first
one is that these
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companies
should
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use
the vehicles which creates less pollution which is possible
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due
to applied science. The second one is that if they have
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to setup
their industries than they should
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use
as much as space required. The third one is that they should arrange their tours according to traffic
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people
for example
, if there is bus and
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people
are three in it than its completely waste of time and money they should offer them cars or what they have for less passenger.

In conclusion
, if there is merit of something then it is
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very
common that the thing has demerits
also
therefore
if anything creates
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problems
than there solutions are
also
there
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but
a once
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have to
find it.

IELTS essay These days tourism has created a number of environment problems. what are these problems? Discuss some solutions?

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
261 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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