Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.
Check Your Text it's free

These days, the most of people using modern form of communication such as email and messaging to communicate with their friends.

These days, the most of people using modern form of communication such as email and messaging to communicate with their friends. 2LaM
These days, the most of people using modern form of communication such as email and messaging to communicate with their friends. However, this has had a negative effects on their social lives, I believe that using modern form of communication has many positive effects as well. First of all, that activities have reduced their amount of time for people to seeing their friend. For example, the people who was communicate with their friends became more enjoyable to talk by email and messaging. Moreover, they usually felt clumsy to start the conversation if they met their friends. Therefore, email and messaging make them talked more comfortable and free to expressed their feeling without bashful and see face each other. On the other hand, using email and messaging will be easy for people to communicate with other friends in different cities or different places without spend their time to meet by directly. Furthermore, that people will get information faster than old generations. As we know, sending letter by post mail will spend much time, so email and messaging will help them to communicate with their friends as fast as they want. Likewise, technology in modern form of communication will connect many people who they do not know each other before. For example, Facebook, Twitter, and Blog there are become media for many people to be acquainted with other person so they could make networking and good relation to improve their social lives. In conclusion, I think that email and messaging can influence on people’s social lives because they do not have much time to visiting their friends. However, I believe that modern form of communication will provide people to widespread their networking and linking to other people over the world.
These days, the most of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
using
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
modern
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
form
of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
communication
such as email and messaging to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
communicate
with their
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
friends
.
However
, this has had a
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
negative
effects on their social
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
lives
, I believe that using
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
modern
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
form
of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
communication
has
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
positive
effects
as well
.

This phrase is redundant. Consider using "first".
First of all
, that activities have
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
reduced
their amount of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
time
for
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
to seeing their
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
friend
.
For example
, the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
who was
Consider using a past participle here: "communicated".
communicate
with their
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
friends
became more enjoyable to talk by email and messaging.
Moreover
, they
usually
felt clumsy to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
start
the conversation if they met their
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
friends
.
Therefore
, email and messaging
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
them talked more comfortable and free to expressed their feeling without bashful and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
see
face each other.

On the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
other
hand, using email and messaging will be easy for
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
communicate
with
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
other
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
friends
in
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
different
cities or
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
different
places without spend their
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
time
to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
meet
by
directly
.
Furthermore
, that
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
information faster than
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
old
generations. As we know, sending letter by post mail will spend much
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
time
,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
email and messaging will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
them to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
communicate
with their
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
friends
as
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
fast
as they want.
Likewise
, technology in
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
modern
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
form
of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
communication
will connect
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
who they do not know each
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
other
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
before
.
For example
, Facebook, Twitter, and Blog there
are become
media for
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
to
be acquainted
with
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
other
person
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
they could
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
networking and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
relation to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
improve
their social
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
lives
.

In conclusion
, I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
think
that email and messaging can influence on
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people’s
social
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
lives
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
they do not have much
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
time
to visiting their
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
friends
.
However
, I believe that
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
modern
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
form
of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
communication
will provide
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
to widespread their networking and linking to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
other
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
over the world.
What do you think?
  • This is funny writingFunny
  • I love this writingLove
  • This writing has blown my mindWow
  • It made me angryAngry
  • It made me sadSad

IELTS essay These days, the most of people using modern form of communication such as email and messaging to communicate with their friends.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
288 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Labels Descriptions
  • ?
    Currently is not available
  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
Recent posts