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These days socialising online is prefered more my people rather than face to face interaction this essay willdiscuss some of the possible reason behind this and wil also explain the area of negative devlopment in this.

These days socialising online is prefered more my people rather than face to face interaction this essay willdiscuss some of the possible reason behind this and wil also explain the area of negative devlopment in this. One of the major problem arising is socialising online rather than meeting people. Earleir people use to go out and interact with their friends, cousins etc in cafes resturants etc but nowadays people prefer sitting at home and chatting. this is due to better internet facilities at cheap rates and better chatting apps. it is also easier and time saving for people tointeract online rather than meeting personally

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One of the major problem arising is Possible spelling mistake. ‘socialising’ is British English.socializing
socialising
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use to
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resturants
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but
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