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these days, in many countries, fewer and fewer people want to become teachers, particularly in secondary schools. What are the reasons for this, and how could the problem be solved?

these days, in many countries, fewer and fewer people want to become teachers, particularly in secondary schools. What are the reasons for this, and how could the problem be solved? 1KqL
In this day and age, becoming educator especially for a junior high school is chosen by the minority of people. This essay will have a look at some of the serious problems associated with becoming teachers suggest some preventative measures that could be taken to cope with this problem. One of the main cause of the issue is that although the works of teachers are more difficult compare to some other jobs, government offers a low wages to them. In other words, there are some jobs that are not as difficult as teachers such as lowers, they should only follow the roles of government but they can have enormous salaries. However, the tutor who work at school are offered as same as drivers who work for a government. The solution is for the government raise teachers’ pay significantly which would attract more people into the profession. Another problem is that there are many badly behaved children at school that always disturb teacher’s concentration during the whole lesson. Educators often have to deal with those kind of pupils who disobey them, and it leads to give up teaching. This tends to put off potential teachers as well. To tackle this issue parents must give their children a sense of respect for teachers. In order to make children behave in class. To conclude, becoming a teacher is not as popular as being lower or doctor in many countries, due to reasons such as the salary and pupils’ behavior. This is a serious problem, and unless we can get more talented people to became a teacher, the education of our children will suffer.
In this day and age, becoming educator
especially
for a junior high school
is chosen
by the minority of
people
. This essay will have a look at
some of the
serious problems associated with becoming
teachers
suggest
some
preventative measures that could
be taken
to cope with this problem.

One of the main cause of the issue is that although the works of
teachers
are more difficult compare to
some
other jobs,
government
offers a low wages to them.
In other words
, there are
some
jobs that are not as difficult as
teachers
such as lowers, they should
only
follow the roles of
government
but
they can have enormous salaries.
However
, the tutor who work at school
are offered
as same as drivers who work for a
government
. The solution is for the
government
raise
teachers’
pay
significantly
which would attract more
people
into the profession.

Another problem is that there are
many
badly
behaved
children
at school that always disturb
teacher’s
concentration during the whole lesson. Educators
often
have to
deal with
those kind
of pupils who disobey them, and it leads to give up teaching. This tends to put off potential
teachers
as well
. To tackle this issue parents
must
give their
children
a sense of respect for
teachers
. In order to
make
children
behave in
class
.

To conclude
, becoming a
teacher
is not as popular as being lower or doctor in
many
countries, due to reasons such as the salary and pupils’ behavior. This is a serious problem, and unless we can
get
more talented
people
to became
a
teacher
, the education of our
children
will suffer.
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IELTS essay these days, in many countries, fewer and fewer people want to become teachers, particularly in secondary schools. What are the reasons for this, and how could the problem be solved?

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
270 words
6.0
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