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some people think that children should be taught at school to recycle materials and avoid waste. other people belive that children should be taught this at home discuss both the views and give your opinion?

some people think that children should be taught at school to recycle materials and avoid waste. other people belive that children should be taught this at home OJ2E
Nowadays, it is said that human waste is the greatest threat to the planet. Some belive that educational institute should be learn about recyling and avoiding waste to thie pupils, whereas, another group of thinkers support, it should be learn by teach by their parents at homr. However, both has its own pros and cons. Therefore, before commenting on my decision, both the opinion would be discussed in ensuing paragraphs. Examining the former opinuon, the primary argument the supporters would put forward is, schools are significant in imbibing these moral values can argue that children will learn from professionals teachers. This is because, teachers can explain benifits and importance of recycling and drawbacks of waste more efficiently. In addition, they also believe that schools have specific subjects, which explain the damage done by the waste and what can be done to reduce it. For instance, in geography subject pictures and graphs are used to explain the problem of waste and different ways of recycling is given. Therefore, schools can ve of great value in teaching the importance of recycling and reducing the waste. On the contrary, the latter view suggest that children spend more time with their psrents at home and more waste is produced at home. Because of this, parents can easily gives practical knowledge about recycle and avoiding waste. Infact, when parents can put recycle products like glass and water bottle in recycle dustbin then children follws and copy it from their parents. As a result, youngster easliy learn to kepp away from waste and recyling some products. To conclude and gove my opinion, I would opine that balancing both the view is most logical and i would say that parents as well as teachers both have responsibility to learn children about avoiding waste and recyling materials because it is good for not only human being but also for our planet.
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is said
that human
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waste
is the greatest threat to the planet.
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Some
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belive
that educational institute should be
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learn
about
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recyling
and avoiding
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waste
to
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thie
pupils, whereas, another group of thinkers support, it should be
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learn
by teach by their
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parents
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homr
.
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, both has its
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own
pros and cons.
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,
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before
commenting on my decision, both the opinion would
be discussed
in ensuing paragraphs.

Examining the former
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opinuon
, the primary argument the supporters would put forward is, schools are significant in imbibing these moral values can argue that
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children
will
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learn
from professionals teachers. This is
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because
, teachers can
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explain
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benifits
and importance of recycling and drawbacks of
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waste
more
efficiently
.
In addition
, they
also
believe that schools have specific subjects, which
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explain
the damage done by the
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waste
and what can
be done
to
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reduce
it.
For instance
, in geography subject pictures and graphs are
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used
to
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explain
the problem of
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waste
and
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different
ways of recycling is
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given
.
Therefore
, schools can ve of great value in teaching the importance of recycling and reducing the waste.

On the contrary
, the latter view suggest that
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children
spend more time with their
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psrents
at home and more
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waste
is produced
at home.
Because of this
,
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parents
can
easily
gives practical knowledge about recycle and avoiding
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waste
.
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Infact
, when
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parents
can put recycle products like glass and water bottle in recycle dustbin then
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children
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follws
and copy it from their
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parents
.
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easliy
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learn
to
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kepp
away from
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waste
and
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recyling
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some
products.

To conclude
and
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gove
my opinion, I would opine that balancing both the view is most logical and
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i
would say that
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parents
as well
as teachers both have responsibility to
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learn
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children
about avoiding
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waste
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recyling
materials
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because
it is
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good
for not
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human being
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but
also
for our planet.
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IELTS essay some people think that children should be taught at school to recycle materials and avoid waste. other people belive that children should be taught this at home

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4 paragraphs
313 words
6.0
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