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There's also bad impact too. When the number of personal vehicle is increased, traffic and polution is going to be anywhere. I

There's also bad impact too. When the number of personal vehicle is increased, traffic and polution is going to be anywhere. I lNbX
There's also bad impact too. When the number of personal vehicle is increased, traffic and polution is going to be anywhere. It makes road users is uncomfortable and easier to get more angry if they stuck in traffic. I agree the solution to solve traffic and polution problems is to increasing the price of petrol so it make all of car owners prefer to using public transportation and I thought public transportation right now is better than before. There's GoJek, Grab and MRT in Jakarta and Palembang.
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impact too. When the number of personal vehicle
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, traffic and
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polution
is going to be anywhere. It
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road users is uncomfortable and easier to
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more angry if they stuck in traffic.

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agree
the solution to solve traffic and
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polution
problems is
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to increasing
the price of petrol
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it
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make
 
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all of car
owners prefer to
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using
public transportation and I
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thought
public transportation right
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now
is better than
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. There's
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GoJek
, Grab and MRT in Jakarta and Palembang.

IELTS essay There's also bad impact too. When the number of personal vehicle is increased, traffic and polution is going to be anywhere. I

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