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There seems to be an increasing trend towards assessing students through exams rather than through continual assessment. v.4

There seems to be an increasing trend towards assessing students through exams rather than through continual assessment. v. 4
Nowadays the examination one of the major thing to estimate children’s ability and the exams more popular than continual assessment. This essay will highlight both the benefits and drawbacks that result from such an approach. One evident benefit accruing from exam estimating students’ performance is that no room for cheating high. In other words undergraduates mostly try to cheat the answers from other pupils, probability of being caught in one of them. Another auspicious side of this is, teachers can really know what a student lacks because the majority of students shying when they couldn’t realize the topic and examination is the well way what is schoolchild’s score and what this child know. Furthermore, students have a chance to compensate for low grades, this is also innocuous way to race with each other. That is say most of children love to be better that other kids that is why the like compensating with each other. Despite this advantages, there is also various of disadvantages to examination. Firstly no time to actually study. To be more specific they only have time to cram for exams, parochial progress. That is abstract from self education or what they are interested. Secondly, too much stress, too often held exams. This means, many times a student who is otherwise good may get anxious, distressed or confuse, under strict exam conditions and may not perform up to the mark. In conclusion, while there are plus points to qualify for the exam, there are also disadvantages such as no time for normal education and the health of students
Nowadays the examination one of the major thing to estimate children’s ability and the exams more popular than continual assessment. This essay will highlight both the benefits and drawbacks that result from such an approach.

One evident benefit accruing from exam estimating
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students’
performance is that no room for cheating high. In
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other
words undergraduates
mostly
try to cheat the answers from
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other
pupils, probability of
being caught
in one of them. Another auspicious side of this is, teachers can
really
know what a
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student
lacks
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because
the majority of
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students
shying when they couldn’t realize the topic and examination is the well way what is schoolchild’s score and what this child
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.
Furthermore
,
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students
have a chance to compensate for low grades, this is
also
innocuous way to race with each
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other
.
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say
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most of children
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love
to be better that
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other
kids
that is
why the like compensating with each other.

Despite
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advantages, there is
also
various of disadvantages to examination.
Firstly
no time to actually study. To be more specific they
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only
have time to cram for exams, parochial progress.
That is
abstract from self education or what they
are interested
.
Secondly
, too much
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stress
, too
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often
held exams. This means,
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many
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student
who is
otherwise
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good
may
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anxious, distressed or confuse, under strict exam conditions and may not perform up to the mark.

In conclusion
, while there are plus points to qualify for the exam, there are
also
disadvantages such as no time for normal education and the health of
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students
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IELTS essay There seems to be an increasing trend towards assessing students through exams rather than through continual assessment. v. 4

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
259 words
6
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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