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There is no denying the fact that dressing plays a vital role in one’s physical appearance.

There is no denying the fact that dressing plays a vital role in one’s physical appearance. To choose a proper dress is something of a dilemma to the public because they sometimes are confused. But nowadays people are becoming very conscious about choosing proper clothes appropriate to the situation. Whereas some people give priority to comfort or simplicity and choose casual wear often. Before rendering my opinion, I think it is necessary to take a glance at the arguments of both sides. According to the situation, generally, people choose traditional wear at festival time or at social events like marriage, party, birthday occasions etc. Sometimes, they choose to wear formal clothes with a suit at the working places or offices. Office wear represents professional approach towards work and creates a more realistic working environment. There are many organisations or companies prefer common dress for all their employees at working place. It develops certain moral values like unity, team spirit, etc. Modern business management strategies have accepted the importance of common dress code to create a better working environment. However, fashion trends also influence the people’s choice to select clothes. Especially youth is becoming more and more fashion conscious nowadays. In contrary, some people prefer to wear casual clothes or the clothes which make them comfortable. Generally, their preference is comfort over smartness. Meanwhile, some people are so simple by nature or they believe in simplicity and don’t give too much attention to recent fashion trends. In my opinion, I would prefer to wear clothes appropriate to the situation because time demands it. The main reason for my propensity for this is due to the fact that good appearance always creates a good impression. Summing up, I would say the choice of clothes depends on one’s lifestyle.
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a proper dress is something of a dilemma to the public
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clothes
appropriate to the situation. Whereas
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some
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people
give priority to comfort or simplicity and
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choose
casual
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wear
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often
.
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rendering my opinion, I
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it is necessary to take a glance at the arguments of both sides.

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generally
,
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people
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choose
traditional
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at festival time or at social
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events
like marriage, party, birthday occasions etc.
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, they
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to
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wear
formal
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clothes
with a suit at the
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working
places or offices. Office
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wear
represents professional approach towards work and creates a more realistic
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working
environment. There are
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many
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organisations
or
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companies
prefer common dress for all their employees at
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working
place. It develops certain moral values like unity, team spirit, etc. Modern business management strategies have
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accepted
the importance of common dress code to create a better
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working
environment.
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, fashion trends
also
influence the
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people’s
choice to select
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clothes
.
Especially
youth is becoming more and more fashion conscious nowadays.

In contrary,
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people
prefer to
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casual
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or the
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which
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make
them comfortable.
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, their preference is comfort over smartness. Meanwhile,
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nature or
they believe in simplicity and don’t give too much attention to recent fashion trends.

In my opinion, I would prefer to
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wear
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clothes
appropriate to the situation
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because
time demands it. The main reason for my propensity for
this is due to the fact that
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good
appearance always creates a
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good
impression. Summing up, I would say the choice of
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clothes
depends on one’s lifestyle.

IELTS essay There is no denying the fact that dressing plays a vital role in one’s physical appearance.

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  American English
4 paragraphs
296 words
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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