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The Affect of the Internet on Daily Communication

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With an increasing population communicating via the internet and text messaging, face to face communication will become a thing of the past. To what extent do you agree? Internet plays an essential role in todays society. Most of the everyday stuff we do relies on the internet, and one of the crucial roles it has is that it’s a great tool for communication. 50 years ago, it was impossible for people to meet a stranger from the other side of the world without the necessity of leaving their home. But now, by using the internet, we are able to make online friends from countries around the world and communicate with them virtually, just sitting on the couch in our homes. It also made long-distance relationships more common among the young generation. Even though, in my opinion, this kind of communication can never replace a face to face one. Speaking of communication via the internet, it’s not only limited to communicating with strangers in foreign countries, but it is also used to keep in touch with friends and family members. If you miss your grandmother for instance, you can see her in a video call with two clicks on your cell phone. The question is, would you bother to get dressed, drive 20minutes to her house, and see her in person instead? In order to answer this question, I want to mention the current situation with the covid-19 going on. This pandemic made our communication even more dependent on our cell phones and the internet. Comfort is not the case anymore, it’s our safety that makes us communicate via the internet and not face to face, in order to maintain our health. But it can be seen that this kind of communication has made people overwhelmed and everyone is exhausted of current situation. Everyone is waiting for a chance to meet their loved ones in person. We, as humans, need to hug people we love, to kiss them and to hold their hands, and doing these kind of things are never possible via the internet. That’s why I believe that meeting someone in person would never get replaced by virtual communication via the internet, however, the internet can lower the need of face to face communication in someways. In conclusion, I believe that face to face communication will remain with us, humans, forever.
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society. Most of the everyday stuff we do relies on the internet, and one of the crucial roles it has is that it’s a great tool for
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communication
. 50 years ago, it was impossible for
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a stranger from the other side of the world without the necessity of leaving their home.
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now
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make
online friends from countries around the world and communicate with them
virtually
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just
sitting on the couch in our homes. It
also
made long-distance relationships more common among the young generation.
Even though
, in my opinion, this kind of
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communication
can never replace a
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to
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one.

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via the internet, it’s not
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only
limited to communicating with strangers in foreign countries,
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it is
also
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used
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keep
in touch with friends and family members. If you miss your grandmother
for instance
, you can
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see
her in a video call with two clicks on your cell phone. The question is, would you bother to
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get
dressed, drive 20minutes to her
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, and
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see
her in person
instead
?

In order to answer this question, I want to mention the
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current
situation with the
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covid-19
going on. This pandemic made our
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communication
even more dependent on our cell phones and the internet. Comfort is not the case anymore, it’s our safety that
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makes
us communicate via the internet and not
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to
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face
, in order to maintain our health.
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it can be
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seen
that this kind of
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has made
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people
overwhelmed and everyone
is exhausted
of
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current
situation. Everyone is waiting for a chance to
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meet
their
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loved
ones in person. We, as humans, need to hug
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people
we
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love
, to kiss them and to hold their hands, and doing
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these kind
of things are never possible via the internet. That’s why I believe that meeting someone in person would never
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get
replaced by virtual
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communication
via the internet,
however
, the internet can lower the need of
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face
to
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face
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communication
in someways.
In conclusion
, I believe that
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to
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communication
will remain with us, humans, forever.
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IELTS essay The Affect of the Internet on Daily Communication

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
392 words
6.0
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