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There is an increasing trend for travelers to explore remote and hard-to-access places, like the Sahara desert or the South Pole of the Earth, of late.

There is an increasing trend for travelers to explore remote and hard-to-access places, like the Sahara desert or the South Pole of the Earth, of late. 85ORB
There is an increasing trend for travelers to explore remote and hard-to-access places, like the Sahara desert or the South Pole of the Earth, of late. This essay will expound on the positive and negative aspects of this phenomenon and then will conclude. There are many advantages to visiting places with extreme ambiance. First and foremost, a trip to a place with difficult conditions is quite an adventure for the tourists. For example, the South Pole sky is the ultimate degree of expedition according to many daredevils. In addition to this, tourists can get a glimpse into the wildlife that no aquarium or zoo can ever really replicate. For example, Antarctica is the paradise of the world’s most rare species such as the Weddell seal, emperor penguin, albatross, petrel, to mention but a few. Besides, adventurers can take stunning photographs of breathtaking landscapes. A case in point is the Sahara Desert. From beautiful oases to brilliant white colors of the stones are best seen in the sweet light of the morning and dusk hours when surreal images can be taken. Finally, such extreme tourism boosts travelers’ confidence. However, expeditions also bring about damage to the places. It has a devastating impact on breeding animals. That is to say that animals are made anxious by an influx of tourists that may cause them to vacate a habitat altogether if frequently disturbed. For instance, there is myriad evidence of birds that previously nested near the Antarctic bases abandoned due to the constant human activity around the area. Likewise, the growing number of tourists causes the depletion of local natural resources, pollution, and waste issue as well. Finally, this extreme tourism claims the lives of many travelers and often brings unfathomable devastations to travelers. In conclusion, although tourism in places with dire conditions reaps many benefits, the negative impacts on visitors should not be overlooked as well. Therefore, governments should make every effort to sustain the environment as well as encourage eco-tourism to save the environment and lives.
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places
, like the Sahara desert or the South Pole of the Earth, of late. This essay will expound on the
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positive
and
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negative
aspects of this phenomenon and then will conclude.

There are
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many
advantages to visiting
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places
with extreme ambiance.
First
and foremost, a trip to a
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place
with difficult conditions is quite an adventure for the
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tourists
.
For example
, the South Pole sky is the ultimate degree of expedition according to
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many
daredevils.
In addition
to this,
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tourists
can
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get
a glimpse into the wildlife that no aquarium or zoo can ever
really
replicate.
For example
, Antarctica is the paradise of the world’s most rare species such as the Weddell seal, emperor penguin, albatross, petrel, to mention
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but
a few.
Besides
, adventurers can take stunning photographs of breathtaking landscapes. A case in point is the Sahara Desert. From
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beautiful
oases to brilliant white colors of the stones are best
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seen
in the sweet light of the morning and dusk hours when surreal images can
be taken
.
Finally
, such extreme tourism boosts travelers’ confidence.

However
, expeditions
also
bring about damage to the
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places
. It has a devastating impact on breeding animals.
That is
to say that animals
are made
anxious by an influx of
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tourists
that may cause them to vacate a habitat altogether if
frequently
disturbed.
For instance
, there is myriad evidence of birds that previously nested near the Antarctic bases abandoned due to the constant human activity around the area.
Likewise
, the growing number of
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tourists
causes the depletion of local natural resources, pollution, and waste issue
as well
.
Finally
, this extreme tourism claims the
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lives
of
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many
travelers and
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often
brings unfathomable
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devastations
to travelers.

In conclusion
, although tourism in
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places
with dire conditions reaps
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many
benefits, the
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negative
impacts on visitors should not
be overlooked
as well
.
Therefore
,
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governments
should
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make
every effort to sustain the environment
as well
as encourage
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eco-tourism
to save the environment and
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lives
.
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IELTS essay There is an increasing trend for travelers to explore remote and hard-to-access places, like the Sahara desert or the South Pole of the Earth, of late.

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