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There is a good deal of evidence that increasing car use is contributing to global warming and having other undesirable effects on people’s health and well-being. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

There is a good deal of evidence that increasing car use is contributing to global warming and having other undesirable effects on people’s health and well-being. with this statement? kYYqd
Bulk ownership of cars leads to the emergence of traffic congestion. Consequently, it resulted in various environmental and health issues, such as global warming surging air and noise pollution followed by health problems such as lung cancer stress and anxiety etcetra. I agreed with the given statement that adverse impact on the humankind and their surrounding overweight it's convenience or comfort. However, to control these problems government should take the following steps to ensure the environment sustainability for our coming generations. The first and most effective could be to make it expensive to have a car and using it. This can be implemented by leaving a high tax or duties on purchasing a vehicle along with the surge in the gas prices to control the car demand in the market. However, there is a drawback of this approach as it is frequently the lower residents who will be suffering from this policy with increased cost of living expensive such as a gasoline expense. Hence, poorer people will reduce their family trips and working longer hours which will create the problem of work-life imbalance. Another idea to dissuade individuals from using automobile is to encourage them using alternative ways such as a public transportation. But, to implement this idea government should invest sufficient funds to build wide and safe infrastructure, frequent bus services attached to all the remote areas. Moreover, public fare policy should be in the interest of natives, which means not to be overpriced. Additionally, municipality should formulate policy to restrict the use of car hours on the local streets on the weekends. Owing to the fact it will allow children and people to have some more outdoor activities. As a result, it will have favorable impact on their health and environment by reducing carbon footprint. To recapitulate, increasing the car price and easy access to the public transportation will bring a huge shift in reducing environmental problems and will ensure its sustainability.
Bulk ownership of
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cars
leads to the emergence of traffic congestion.
Consequently
, it resulted in various environmental and health issues, such as global warming surging air and noise pollution followed by health
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problems
such as lung cancer
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stress
and anxiety
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etcetra
. I
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agreed
with the
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given
statement that adverse impact on the humankind and their surrounding overweight it's convenience or comfort.
However
, to control these
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problems
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government
should take the following steps to ensure the environment sustainability for our coming generations.

The
first
and most effective could be to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
it expensive to have a
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car
and using it. This can
be implemented
by leaving a high tax or duties on purchasing a vehicle along with the surge in the gas prices to control the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
car
demand in the market.
However
, there is a drawback of this approach as it is
frequently
the lower residents who will be suffering from this policy with increased cost of living expensive such as a gasoline expense.
Hence
, poorer
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people
will
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reduce
their family trips and working longer hours which will create the
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problem
of work-life imbalance.

Another
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idea
to dissuade individuals from using automobile is to encourage them using alternative ways such as a public transportation.
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But
, to implement this
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
idea
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
government
should invest sufficient funds to build wide and safe infrastructure, frequent bus services attached to all the remote areas.
Moreover
, public fare policy should be in the interest of natives, which means not to
be overpriced
.
Additionally
, municipality should formulate policy to restrict the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
car
hours on the local streets on the weekends. Owing to the fact it will
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allow
children and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
to have
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some
more outdoor activities.
As a result
, it will have favorable impact on their health and environment by reducing carbon footprint.

To recapitulate, increasing the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
car
price and easy access to the public transportation will bring a huge shift in reducing environmental
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
problems
and will ensure its sustainability.
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IELTS essay There is a good deal of evidence that increasing car use is contributing to global warming and having other undesirable effects on people’s health and well-being. with this statement?

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